Reviews for Pokemon Ash and May The Acciedent |
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![]() ![]() Aww |
![]() ![]() Some spelling errors but good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 2? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do more chapters and make it more detailed oh yeh please get your grammer and your spelling correct |
![]() ![]() like it |
![]() ![]() tip: work on ur spelling and grammar come down? seriously it's calm down idiot |
![]() ![]() HAHAHA Max is having the life that Brock used to have! HAHAHA |
![]() ![]() Awsome fanfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is like the most exciting story I've ever read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow nice awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() lo poco que entendi se me hiso emosionante |
![]() ![]() a lot of spelling and grammer mistakes but it had a good plot. You should get a beta reader to help you. |
![]() ![]() This is a good story |
![]() ![]() good story but why is it in the pani poni dash area? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is not pani poni dash. pokemon can be found in the games section. |