I sympathize with you, I do. I'm swamped with these midterms right now, and I just want spring break to get here.

Short update, but good update. I like the fact that she's not in love with Dallas; it's so much more realistic.

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Is Dallas a little hot for Glenda? ;)

lol

UPDATE SOON PLEASE! LOVE IT!

That was short but really good. Updater, like soon!

tht was sweet!

very steveish too!

GREAT JOB!

Awsome story, you should write more! and it is way better than the over version...it was a bit corny but this one is good so far

Hoorah! You updated! :)

I loved this chapter, with everyone sorta "bonding". Everyone was in perfect character, and I liked it a lot. :D

Sorry. I'd write more, but I'm really supposed to be studying. Shh! xD

Update soon!

~TheNightimeSky

I love the voice you give Soda. :)

Well, I had to refresh myself on this. O.K. you've got the charactars out pretty good.i love two-bit in this and steve is just steve. I like Glenda's personality too, by now...atleast.

Oh, I almost forgot!

I liked that you didn't introduce Glenda (or "Munchkin". xD Gotta love Two-bit.) until the fifth chapter. It gave us time to get used to the story, and very few people seem to do that, nowadays. So good job!

I liked it. And Glenda's character too. She didn't fit seamlessly into the gang, but she isn't. . .a total outcast, you know?

Update soon!

~TheNightimeSky

"I got White Lightning primed and ready. She's gonna run like a dream."

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Oh my god. xD I had to do a double-take on that line. I was scarily reminded of "Grease Lightning", and I was like, "WOAH!" Because they were greasers too, and - and, you know?

Er - I'll stop. Okay.

he DX is the one place I don't steal from; I'd never be able to forgive myself if Steve or Soda lost their job 'cause of my little habit.

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I like this line. It's in perfect character for Two-bit. It shows that he knows when to stop a joke, or a habit, yeah?

Hmm. Happy New Year to you, too!

~TheNightimeSky

He looked hungry, so I gave him the peanut butter sandwich.

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xD

Sorry - I loved that line.

Well, I liked it. I'm glad you made it clear that Johnny was quiet by bringing Buck into the picture and being all surprised that Johnny could talk. C:

Good job!

~TheNightimeSky

Hmm. I think Johnny's the TINIEST bit OOC - he's just a little too out-spoken. I mean, Pony said that he wouldn't open his mouth unless he was forced (which is probably exhagerating to a point. ;) ), and I don't think he was totally aware that Dally liked him more than the rest of the gang - he's Johnny; he's self-less, but doesn't hope much for people caring for him back.

Well, I AM curious. Where's Glenda going to stay?

I like it so far, by the way. :)

Hmm - usually these cousin/sister fics aren't very good.

I like this one, though. :) You have good grammar, and I think everyone's pretty in character, so far. xD

I really like this story. It is different than any story I have read before. I can't wait to see what kind of excitement happens. :-

The part where Buck was surprised that Johnny could talk made me chuckle. :P

Good grammar from what I can tell. I wasn't looking much, since my brain's fried and tired from finals 'n' all, but nothing jumped out at me. Keep it up. I like this story. It's a different take on Steve's cousin. Usually people make her go through hell one night at Steve's house and Steve rescues her or something. I also like the fact that you made her interested in Dally. I think you have his personality down in this, as well as the others.

The only thing that's debatable is Darry making sure Johnny ate something. As long as you don't fall under the magical Curtis household spell, then you'll be fine. Just remember, they might not complain about the gang mooching, but bills still need to be paid.

-whatcoloristhesky