Whew...

I really hate it when authors kill of Sirius. He and Harry never get a break.

I wonder what it would be like if I used my spell to make the boat go faster over excited to free Harry "Boato Fastnowo* which makes the boat go twice it's usual speed then when I get to the point the ferry operator usually slows it down he yells "Stop the boat!" but it's too late.

I try to use the *Emergency Stopo Boato" spell to make the emergency brakes come on 100% but it's too late and we slam into the rocks causing quite a ruckus and a half sunk ferry as we swim the rest of the way up.

Everybody hears this Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee of the brakes and then a giant BANG! kinda noise followed by the sounds of the ferry half sunk.

It's unknown if your trying to go for humor or paint a serious story (No pun intended) about the Wizard World and it's Just US department? (Justice)

You need to be more clear as this story looks like it was thrown into a blender.

Length doesn't make a story better. It's quality. I'd rather have a good quality but short fanfic then a bad quality long fanfic.

Hint. I like good long reads though. Stories like this will suck on a phone but I have a real computer so it isn't too much of a bother fo r me.

Until they ban computers I refuse to get into the *smartphones are better then PC's* market hippogriff dung as it's just a way to get everybody onto the same platform so the NSA can spy easier. Instead of all these devices to keep track off.

Ever heard of the powers of manifest thought? Well Harry sure is doing a good job of manifesting his own web of negative energy.

XD MISSED DA BOAT XDDD

cool

Can't believe it's over :'( -sniffed- god I'm crying haha! Actually I think I cried for most of that but it was so amazing! I adored it and well it was an absolutely fantastic story and wow I felt every emotion... I wanted there to be more haha!

I shall get on and read more of your stuff!

Well done :)x

Destrier :)x

I love your story! I just finished reading it and I like how all the characters turned out. I think it's called an Unspeakable, not and Unforgivable. Those are the the 3 forbidden curses.

Fucking amazing :)

Dear sweet Merlin, they let Harry believe Sirius was dead? After the trauma he's already gone through? And they let Remus believe it as well?

I simply can't forgive the adults in this story. I despise each and every one of them for their callousness, ignorance and stupidity.

Did no responsible adult speak to Hermione and Ron? What kind of idiots run at someone whose been through a traumatic experience and hasn't recovered, screaming and jumping on him? Especially when he flinches when he's touched?

Ye gods, you would think that at least little miss know-it-all would have read up on trauma patients and realized that you don't rush them, jump them, or shout at them!

What in the name of Merlin is wrong with Remus and Sirius? The boy's been out of Azkaban for less than 24 hours and hasn't spoken a word, nor eaten a meal. He flinches when touched and won't look them in the eye. And they have the overwhelming audacity (or is it stupidity) to ask him about getting his Hogwarts supplies?

The boy isn't even speaking and they assume he will return to the school where he will be around hundreds of students and where the DE children will most certainly taunt and harass him? Are they totally insane?

he's to late. Don't do that lol. I like how remus does it to ron and ron does it to molly lol. good chapter a little humor in the otherwise drama fic.

i loved it