| Reviews for Alive |
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2017 Hahahahaha she called him Shasta again! Hahahahahahahahahahahaha it so funny to me knowing everything and enjoying things from other stories. |
shieldmaidenoftherohirrim chapter 1 . 6/12/2010 Ahh. Cute. :) |
songhamitra backstreet chapter 1 . 6/6/2010 nice! |
Link Fangirl01 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010 This was WONDERFUL! It's just so special. Totally adding this to my favorites. I thought the fisherman's name was Arsheesh? Is there no R in there? |
Countess of Western March chapter 1 . 12/22/2009 this is my favourite of your works. very charming, funny, and heart-warming, the qualities that some authors tend to forget about when writing their stories |
fledge chapter 1 . 1/20/2009 Beautifully written, once again, and a clever use of coincidence. Seems that Cor is like most fatehrs when it comes to educating kids. And if there are two words that are utterly incompatible, it's Aravis and demure. But then, I shudder to imagine Ram's education without her... |
Baeden chapter 1 . 12/9/2008 That was great! |
Miss Pookamonga chapter 1 . 12/8/2008 *dies in total happiness* I can't sum up in words just how wonderful your writing is! You captured every scene so well...and I love the scene w/ Asheesh, that was cute _ Luv, Miss Pookamonga ;-P |
Alquawende chapter 1 . 11/29/2008 I really enjoyed this. It tied up your oneshots very nicely. Also it was nice to read Cor/Aravis stories for once too. ;) Thanks for writing! |
SpangleyPony chapter 1 . 11/28/2008 A perfect end to your trio of oneshots, I'm glad Aravis didn't lose her spirit when she married Cor and the loving moment at the end was just perfect, shows how she feels about him despite her temper. Good job :) |
GoldenAshes chapter 1 . 11/27/2008 I liked this! I'd never thought of Cor/Shasta running into Asheesh after so long! Also, their wedding night - so like Aravis to fight when he complimented her. And Ram the Great as a two-year old was marvelous. 'Change your socks'. Too funny. My only qualm about this was that Aravis wasn't talking quite like herself - she was always a bit more formal. However, I suppose he rubbed off on her. This really was good. You choose words well and put them together in a quite impressive way. Though your dialogue is not exactly IC (though that's rather unfair, as we don't really know how Aravis would've sounded them) was written well, and this managed to be funny and touching at the same time. Well done! |
almostinsane chapter 1 . 11/27/2008 Great story! LOL. I loved it when Cor met Asheesh. Thanks for writing this. God bless! |
whatever95 chapter 1 . 11/27/2008 Aww, that was sweet. I liked it! |