I can see that is probably won't be updated, but wished to say that it was enjoyable and great. there can be multiple reasons for both of these, but I just wanted to let you know that many love this and wonder what will happen next

So it's been about 8 years...any hope for an update or rewrite?

Soooo it's been like 5 years... About that rewrite lol

That's not fair yo!

Why are all the awesome fics ether abandoned or on long term hiatus?

If you ever update I'll be so happy! I'll be on the lookout!

Because Reno/Rufus/Cloud pairing is one I GOT to see!

Interesting.

This sounds like a really interesting story, and I would love to read all that there is of it. However, I have to tap-out here. The accents make it unreadable. You've over used the accent to the degree that you need a dictionary to try and piece together what is being said.

I see that you have responded to criticism about the use of the accents. And I'm sure you will simply ignore this comment because it's not in line with your belief. Just consider that your aggressive response has helped me decide that this story is no longer worth reading.

i cannot find the rewrite anywhere can you tell me where it is please? thank you

WHAT! Where the hell you got the info that Reno is in Turk when he is ten?

This is so great. XD I feel like the nicknames become so common from Reno that the moment he uses real names everyone has what amounts to an Oh Shi t Moment and they all know something is about to go down. XP

hope the rewrites coming along good just hoping you'll start updating again its been quite a few years since theres been an update for this

yay hedwig

the accent is really annoying! it takes awhile for me to read what it says

Poor Reno

what happens to reno

...I could only ask... please lessen the dark stuff... and please lessen Reno's suffering while you're at it...