Reviews for First Time For Anything |
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![]() ![]() ![]() update love the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update...right now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, i love it...I wonder what did Luffy dream about? can't wait for the update |
![]() ![]() ![]() sniff sniff...this is so good, I really love Sano. Can't wait to read the next chapters and i hope Robin can help heal him |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm relieved that you decided to update. :) It's a great story, not because the plot's interesting but your writing style draws me in. Anyway, great chapter, although Sanji is being a little too mean but nothing unexpected. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should update more. This is a great story XD. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You seriously have to update soon! And it would be nice if you wrote a flashback chapter about how did Sano actually join the crew. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it, I usually don't read fics with OC as main characters but your writing style is good |
![]() ![]() omg i love this story. hmm i usually love zoro robin so it's usually hard for me two see other coupling but this would be a great zoronami coupling in this story. also i think that luffy should remember vivi. lol any way please hurry to continue because this is an amazing story, for creativity, vocabulary, written and all around humor and the descriptiveness. your an amazing writer and this story will be favorites, on alerts as well as you as a writer. please hurry to continue this story :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() you ever gonna finish this? it's really good and I'd like to see more of what you've got planned, not only with Robin, but the others as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I, quite frankly, can't undertand why this doesn't have more reviews. I love it. zbut looking at the date I can see it hasn't been updated in a long time. So I was wondering if you still planned to continue this story? I really hope so. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read the whole story andI have to say it is really well written and one of the best One Piece fics I've here. If you ever decide to finish this story, I'd like to see everything that happens when Sano first appears. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing! This story is just beautiful, I love the way you write, there's so much depth and character development, and the way you hook up an O.C. with Robin was fantastic. XD It does, however, make me wonder how Sano got to the One Piece world in the first place. You did said you'll write a prologue, huh; I hope you do, because I'm so curious about this story. I also noticed that you haven't updated in a while, I get worried after a few months about a stories future. I mean this is too great a tale to let go to waste, keep writing man. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is strangely good. When I began it the fact that it didn't have an introduction as to why the hell he was there irked me, but throughout the story so far you peppered in (well more like dumped) his back story. In terms of emotionality his story does work to tug at my heart a bit and the writing is decent as well. Hopefully you'll update again someday. |