Trying to grit my teeth and read this because I have read EVERY long gaara/hinata fic...but there are so many mistakes. The whole thing feels very lackluster. I'm going to try to muscle through it but I may give up. I love this pairing ;n; I hope it turns around!

I want the sequel

*I think Gaara's point of view is unnecessary and is spoiling his motive too quick!

How did he lift Hinata with a gunshot wound?

Ok so I know it's been a few years since you posted this story but let me tell you... OMG this is literally the best Gaahina story I have ever read. I loved it so much. You are a great writer and I plan on reading more from you!

OH MY GOSHHH! UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE D;

Honestly, i find this very interesting. Unfortunately, the way you storytell is a bit, uhm, too newbie... And, well, it makes me kinda squirm. I honestlt wanted to go on, but i could not.
You forgot to put punctuations, and sometimes proper spacing. There's also the change of narrative mode. I dont think that changing it from third to first is something... Well, nice. You should stick to one. You could have gaaras thought using third person... I think that what really turns me off, the changing of narrations.
A beta would be nice, cause honestly, plot wise, its very interesting.

As far as I read this fic was terrible. This fic just YURI content! So disgusting!

This story was interesting. It was so hard to read because Gaara became such a terrible person as the story progressed. Then Hinata made a drastic change and then it just seemed like they'd never come to terms with each other but you somehow managed to put them together in the end. Good job!

Best Gaahina I've EVER read! I just love it! Continue please,

OMG did that story just end? what happened? I mean is she back with Gaara? im soo confused, but this story was a really really good story I love it33

"Mizuki boys like that are usually trouble and if somebody saw you help him they might come after you." who is Mizuki was this story an original but you maid it in to a naruto fanfic? or was it another fanfic? I like it so far.

I love happy endings

Yay! Yay! Yay! I'm so excited! XD

omg please make a sequel. this story made me so emotional i would hate for it to stop there.