I can't keep reading this. You write very well, but I am so angry and frustrated with these sorry excuses for parents. They are controlling, even though she's of age, a legal adult and doing their neglecting arses a favor by even looking at their ungrateful, undeserving faces. They are completely self-serving and unwilling to see her side, and make everything out to be her fault. They care nothing for her happiness that they are steadily chipping away at, and quite frankly, every time her sorry excuse for a father opens his mouth I am disgusted or angry with what comes out of it. I hope you are not writing from personal experience, because no one should have to live like that.. I could go on listing their asinine tendencies, but I think I've made my point. As a writer you are very good, you have a great vocabulary and an interesting plot. It's just the parents that ruin it for me, sorry.

the moon's first name is actually lily and she was sorted into either slytherin, griffindork, or huffpuffy

I don't know if that was an intentional futurama reference but I love it

Oh Hermione...I get it is stressful and upsetting, but you knew the gist, you knew you were adopted, that you would return...ugh. I totally get why she is upset, but she’s not being very kind with really anyone about this. They did it to keep her safe, they compromised/changed the contact written years ago. She has a very f-off attitude right now that frankly all things considered I don’t much appreciate considering all these people did for her.

aww this was adorable. great job

well done fluffy Blaise and Hermione

nice. I'm looking forward to Ron and Ginny getting their comeuppance

nice adopted Hermione story

I appreciate the endnote on this chapter

Very creative plot and a very cute couple. I have not read many Blaise/ Hermione stories.

This was a great story!

sure glad snape is still around, since no one else can counter that curse~

Good story.

Cute story! I loved the premise of it.

Bender, Fry and Zoidberg IM FUCKING DEADDDDDDDDD