It's good that you finally got the time to work on your story again and yeah, I agree with you that it is complete BS that Ash lost again, this time to Alain...plus so far the Team Flare arc is definately superior to the rushed Team Plasma arc (felt like a crappy rehash of Pikachu are-Volts there). In fact, it did suck that Noivern and Goodra are treated as fail guys again for the sake of plot purposes.

Not only this but I heard the reason Ash lost the Kalos League was because they brought back the writers from Black and White for that episode. Also I heard Ash will be attending school when he starts his Alola Journey in the anime and there will be a Pokemon Generations anime in the works too (plus Team Skull is the confirmed Villanous team for Alola).

Also Phanphy already evolved into Donphan during the Kanto Battle Frontier arc before the events of Sinnoh believe it or not so I just wanted to let you know that. Which means Ash's Cyndaquil was the only one to evolve during the Sinnoh League in terms of his older Pokemon plus I don't think Ash ever used Bayleef at the Sinnoh League either but it's your decision.

Hopefully the next chapter will berry ally good, and hope you pass your exam on October.

wow once i started reading this i couldnt stop until how much u wrote

this story exceeds all stories

but i beg u that u finish it without delay
as to say i am a big fan

i also have a favor
could u add Umbreon to the story

hope hearing from u soon

Wow, looking good and glad you could do more for the story and I am glad you are liking the Alola region (aka the new region for Sun and Moon) yes I am also getting the Sun version but not sure yet on what my starter should be... Oh well, I will get to that later but hopefully the plot will be good. I also assume that Sir Max knows Ash will lose the Sinnoh League to Tobias and lose the Unova League to Cameron.

Which makes me wonder how Ash and May will react to learning the Alola region will be the next region Ash will go to after the Kalos region, as well as learning Ash will be getting Greninja/Ash-Greninja in Kalos and Ash's Charizard permanently returning to Ash at Unova and the Decolore Islands after the Unova League and being left at Oak's Lab with the rest of Ash's Pokemon before heading to Kalos with Pikachu and Alexa.

Wow, that is good having Ash and May meeting and interacting with Sir Max, makes me wonder how he looks familar to them... Oh and I am surprised Max never brought up the Decolore Islands, the Sevii Islands (from Fire Red & Leaf Green since one of them was featured in the Pokemon Chronicles episode The Search for a Legend) or Orre (from Pokemon Colosseum and Pokemon XD Gale of Darkness) but liked the moment where the G-Men from season 5 was brought up again.

Then again, I wonder if the GS Ball will ever make a return and perhaps the Celebi arc being used in it as it was originally intended (Celebi having been inside the GS Ball and be a recurring Legendary Pokemon for the Johto Arc) had Celebi not been in the fourth movie (Pokemon 4Ever, leading to the GS Ball being left forever with Kurt in hopes that everyone would forget about it and the recurring Legendary Pokemon idea would instead be given to Meloetta for Unova) but I will love seeing how you conclude Sinnoh. I do hope you won't have Ash still being 10 years old (as the first BW episode In the Shadow of Zekrom flat out confirms Ash is still 10 years old... Sure BW was originally intended to be a complete reboot of the entire Pokemon anime but it stopped being a reboot halfway through).

Hopefully May won't become jealous when she learns of Ash's childhood friend from Kalos aka Serena (who Ash met in Kanto during their childhood days at Oak's Pokemon Summer Camp) otherwise things could get ugly (especially when Serena comes into the picture in Kalos).

That looks pretty good, also I am surprised that C never mentioned Team Plasma or Team Flare since Team Plasma is the Villanous Team from Unova and Team Flare is the Villanous Team from Kalos, then there is the fact that the Gen VII games Sun and Moon will be coming ut this year for the holidays so we will have to wait for those games to come out before we can find out more on that region (though one of the new gen Pokemon will be in the upcoming 19th movie with Volcanion).

Makes me wonder how this story will affect Unova, the Decolore Islands and Kalos if you ever decide to continue this past Sinnoh but the alliance between Team Rocket and Team Aqua in the future is making things more interesting. Hope to see more soon.

Glad to see the story back in the making, it does have some shocking twists in it but hey, I like these kinds of twists and helps to make the story more interesting, in any case I look forward to seeing the next chapter fairly soon especially as I am sure I will love to see more of the story taking place.

Wow, they sure are quick to accept another talking Meowth. Not even one acusation that he's the Meowth that belongs to Jessie and James. Not even a little on edge or even a little cautious that this Meowth could be the same Meowth who's been trying to steal Pikachu and think that this is some kind of trap, they just want to be friends with him no questions asked. And Meowth is having a hard time accepting Pikachu, it's Pikachu who should be the one having a hard time trusting him.

The story is a little rushed and there are some spelling mistake. Beside that the knight-thing also came out of nowhere. You should have provided more details about the existence of knights in the beginning. Nonetheless the story is decent.

Awesome chapter..

nice chappee

Seriously the knight's of this story make it so unbelievably gay that I cannot read another word. Just stop god its so wrong on so many levels. A metal Claw attack can destroy a sword and how the fuck do they just materialize. Ots really sad do research or something or even put it in BC (Bad Crap) before someone decides to read it. Also a talking meowth? Really? God you are the reason the pokemon fanfics suck so bad.

Very impressive chapter, I wonder how Meowth will deal with Dark as well as how Max will be able to defeat Red and get the belt off of him. It will be great when Ash and May arrive to help Max out. Update soon, this is getting good.

Cool chapter!I have a good idea of what the force belt is, too, not just what you explained.

I cant wait for the next 1!

Torchix

Okay, shouldn't Max know what the belt's effect were, if he got Meowth that belt it must've been for a reason. Max should be fully awear of the belt's effects, otherwise Max just got him that belf for no real reason

One thing that got me thinking was what happened to Meowth (electric-type)? Is he in some kinda of unconscious like state while Red asumed control of the body?

This one wasn't explained that well so I'll wait until the next chapter comes up. Until then, later!

Uh oh, Max is now in for one hell of a fight, especially against a Pokemon like Red. Nice chapter, I hope to see more from you soon.