Awesome idea so far and I hope there is more soon.

I know you said you arnt going to write many more chapters but i crave to see more ash and Mare the way you write them is so breath taking i love your story please please i want to know what will happen when they wake up an will ash say i love you back x

I shall be waiting for the next chapter!

wait...its been since 08 when you last published this story... :/ I trying to tell my self that isn't a bad sign...it's not working though :/

yay! i love it :D

zomg...that was like...wow...(y)

awwe and oooh!

ep! ep! ep! isk, okay it like i forgot words. this really is good!

im still a loss for words here. all i can still say is that this is by far one of the best NW fanfic's I have read. :)

... if you killed her... blllaaaahh,this is sooo good

ahhh!

i love how you twisted it!

i'm a loss for words... I really am enjoying myself reading this :D

still grinning xD haha i like this

i think i grinned through this whole chapter xD

im really enjoying this :D

Hey you should defiantly do a sequel to this, its awsome!

Hayley York