| Reviews for When One Ends |
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  LaBronze James chapter 37 . 12/10/2019 Highly doubt you would come back after 2 years, but if for some reason you do PLEASE continue updating this story! |
 juaniu1994 chapter 13 . 6/22/2019 If you ever decide to change ir add things to this story I thin you should include Veronica and Ash at least making out. It would be great |
| Jonathan chapter 37 . 6/9/2019 Please finish ash and misty need a happy ending. I want ash to tell misty about the small house next to the gym. I think that they should make amends with jessie, james and meowth. I think that ashs dad should make a sudden reappearance (you know as a twist). We should see daisy's kids. |
| viking69 chapter 1 . 6/9/2019 Please update this story |
| Guest chapter 37 . 5/28/2019 Please continue writing, great world building |
| killernooch chapter 28 . 5/19/2019 you are dropping a lot of hints that Daisy is pregnant wonder what everyone's reaction will be |
| killernooch chapter 16 . 5/19/2019 he's gotta go sell some insurance |
| killernooch chapter 14 . 5/19/2019 hmmmm who can I think of that sells bottle caps at tournaments, or who speaks like that |
| PokeObsessed chapter 37 . 4/30/2019 please don't abandon it. update please |
| Guest chapter 37 . 4/10/2019 more please |
| Guest chapter 37 . 4/9/2019 like it please more it has been almost two years please continue |
| kishinaract chapter 37 . 12/25/2018 This story grips me and im sad there isn't more yet but im willing to wait, hope to see more soon! |
| Guest chapter 18 . 11/22/2018 Loved the writing up until this chapter. Starting this off with a rape scene kinda kills the mood. There was no justification for this scene...If you were to add some humor maybe with solidad or the pokemon, it would've been much better. Rest of the chapter flows nicely! |
| tim29842003 chapter 37 . 11/1/2018 hope we see more soon |
| Annie James1790 chapter 37 . 8/24/2018 yes but I feel like the focus of Misty and Ash has been decreasing as the chapters go on |
