I love everything that you've done so far. I can't wait to read more about Sabrae and the Nighthawks, and how it all fits in with Ny.

This is developing so well-I'm completely hooked from the moment I start reading, and then the chapter ends too soon! That's a good thing-you know I'll keep coming back for more! :)

Nice revision :)

Keep up the good work.

Another excellent chapter-nicely paced and the end leaves me wanting more. So, more, please! :)

Chapters 1 - 9 rocks _

Keep up the good work!

By the way, about Neeshka, in my humble opinion you should add her.

Very well done chapter, and nicely tying in the two story lines. It was so good I won't even whimper about the wait! ;)

I'm enjoying what I'm reading so far of this... Ny seems to be a very conflicted character with dark, hidden secrets, and I can't wait to read more of it/her.

My only criticism so far is that the chapters aren't named, just numbered. It's not a problem as such, but titling just gives a description/summary of the chapter and makes it easier for people to revisit a particular chapter if it stands out in their mind.

Keep up the good work!

Okay, finally getting caught up (this is a PROLIFIC group of writers). This moves well, I am enjoying the double story line immensely, and you had better continue it, or I'll send pleading messages daily! ;)

Its really one of the most interesting fics ive read in a while, for shame noone has rewieved it yet

I created an account just so I could rewiev it )

Keep up the awesome work!

/Tweez