| Reviews for Forbidden Love |
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  Guest chapter 9 . 6/22/2018 Jaypaw swiftly sorted the herbs, Heathertail watching his paws, clearly interested. Heathertail had joined ThunderClan not to long ago and she already had a dreamy, mooning look whenever she was around him. And I forgot what time it is, so I gtg to bed. Darnit! |
 Frostheart1 chapter 7 . 6/21/2014 I really love your story but horsetail is for breathing trouble, you would have been better off using marigold. I like the story though. -Frostheart |
| SnowsongIsAJaypawFan chapter 9 . 4/6/2009 :( Poor Lionblaze... but jayxheather is better. |
| Blossomstar of Seasonclan chapter 9 . 3/12/2009 U could do better on u're endings. Please update soon! |
| icestar chapter 9 . 2/1/2009 wonderful. my only critique is that in the first (about) 5 chapters it seemed like Jaypaw could see. O o / IMMA FIRIN' MAH LAZA! \_ (thats my signature) |
| XxXxSkyheartxXxX chapter 9 . 2/1/2009 Short chapter please post more. Good Job though:) |
| lolololololol chapter 9 . 2/1/2009 AWW! You need to update more! I love this story so much! |
| Live.Life.With.Music chapter 9 . 2/1/2009 Yes! You finlly updated! Short chapter but good! |
| Soareno chapter 9 . 2/1/2009 great! don't worry, i know if you just can't write. This is good, but if you're gonna do short chapters, make them more interesting. i thought he'd immediately think he was jealous! ah maybe not, sometims cats can be so clueless (like people!) great story! |
| Hawkflight7 chapter 1 . 1/13/2009 loved it |
| Musings of Mossface chapter 8 . 1/9/2009 aw! |
| typer2131 chapter 8 . 12/28/2008 very interesting. Maybe needs a little more detail, good plot. |
| lightningfoot chapter 5 . 12/28/2008 luvs it! |
| typer2131 chapter 7 . 12/24/2008 really good: please update! |
| Live.Life.With.Music chapter 7 . 12/23/2008 That was a good chapter and Happy Holiday |
