To all the nit witted guests on here. If you don’t like the pairings stop reading it. People are here for imagination and good plots and some smut from time to time. And if you’re a good enough writer, you can pair any kind of character together. And half demon half human is wrong? Botch were in a new generation, love is love. Judge mental twats isn’t something that’s appreciated or anything acceptable anymore. I haven’t read this story yet, just wanted to tell you you’re not welcome to be mean just because your anonymous.

RinxInuYashaxKagomexSesshomaru is a ship I could definitely get behind.

Sesshomaru and Rin pairings make me sick. Thank you for the nauseating relationahip they ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO HAVE! Rin is none of those things that you have Sesshomaru describing her as. Full demon/human pairings should never be. Inuyasha was the result of such a thing. Dogs mate for life just like wolves, so technically Inutaisho cheated on his MATE (Sesshomaru's Mother) and had a human WIFE. Rin is an ugly wench who should NOT be mated to a demon - let alone powerful dog demon like Sesshomaru.

I can't believe you mated Sess with Rin in this. I despise that pairing almost as much as Kouga/Kagome and Sesshomaru/Kagome. All three pairings should NEVER BE! Rin should NEVER be the same age as the other girls. Why does everyone think he of all demons would MATE WITH A HUMAN?! Kouga was only infatuated with Kagome, but had sense to mate with his soulmate. RIN IS NOT SESSHOMARU'S SOULMATE! She is his DAUGHTER! Anyone pairing them romantically is disgusting!

Shit balls I loved this story!

wow just wow... I can't believe I have never found this story before! the way the story went is amazing ! I can't wait to read what else you have wrote! you have a talent that not many people have this story just flowed in just the right way!

Hope you are feeling well rn, and do more InuxKag stories. You inspired me do this.

This is a great and unique story! Thank you for sharing!

"Demon's mark" (don't need the apostrophe)
"quietly. And" (Need a quotation mark)
When Sess bit her last chapter I jokingly thought about how since him & Inu share blood, he would be accepted as a mate somehow, but that was kinda funny. I really liked how this tale played out. Congratulations on finishing & I definitely noticed the much longer last two chapters. I know it's been a few years so you may not fix the errors, but I figured I'd make them easier to find if you did choose to. I hope your health situation has improved or at least not gotten any worse over this time. Great job with your writing. I'm going to see what else you've finished.

"Inuyasha,given"
"Hewouldn't"
"shit's" (don't need the 's)

I kept thinking how crazy would it be if she channeled her power through Inuyasha into Bankotsu so Inu could hurl him at Naraku as a purifying projectile. I'm glad Bank did the right thing. What a show! I'm sure it definitely helped the helicopter locate them too.

"pleaded," If" (your spacing was off)
I'm sure Inuyasha will beat him self for scratching her for awhile. How many was she able to connect with before Naraku came? I feel like I keep repeating myself, but I love how you end the chapters!

Look at her already creating two barriers at once. On the positive side, she has claws so she could make the cuts herself. Since she'll heal faster, I'm hoping they just do it on her fingers.

I could see the possible concern with Koga. Almost like when Inu bit Rin to save her life & her body took it as an attack from a non-mate?

I love how you wrote their connection at the end.

Nice job. Looking forward to seeing which group arrives first. Only confusion was that it sounded like Sess decided to go on the trip AFTER Jakotsu called, but he hadn't done that till the day after they left.