| Reviews for 100 years later |
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GUEST chapter 24 . 11/20/2017 Well, Bella is safe, but the rest of them should be worried. Will Rose try her stunt again, or will Jane just start hurting people without remorse? |
GUEST chapter 18 . 11/20/2017 I am very glad that Bella ran into Edward, but even with Maddie being her singer, I am surprised that Bella was strongly tempted to drink her blood. I thought that animals smelled better than humans. I am happy that Edward stopped her in time. |
GUEST chapter 12 . 11/20/2017 I'm sorry that you don't feel the joy of writing that you deserve. I am enjoying reading this. You shouldn't feel like you have to blackmail fans to feel like writing. Some of us would be enjoying reading so much that we hate to take the time break to review each chapter as we read it, but we would give you a nice review later. Oh well, as you wish. Your story is a good one. |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/20/2017 So, the Voltori killed Laurent? I wonder why, because they didn't know that Bella was with Carlisle's family. Was it because he left her bleeding, as opposed to finishing her off? She would become a vampire without being completely drained of course. |
nessiesmith2012 chapter 6 . 7/25/2017 100 years and she think "How could I move on?" Thats WAY to unbelievable. She isnt suppose to have the same low thinking of love like a teenager anymore, she may be stuck at 17 but maturity will continue to grow. With her its like she is stuck in a teen emo flick "I love him to death and beyond! Will always love him and no other! No matter!" And if your gonna keep her stuck as a brain dead teen that only can love one person (which is shallow) then u should continue two things Teens are stuck with Lust and Love. But I dont see you making her have a sex drive, or is it cause if she was attracted to another guy she would of moved on after the first year. Most teen romances are based on LUST not love but going with the few that are abt love and become hs sweethearts they are still capable of moving on. |
ThunderSphinx chapter 10 . 5/12/2017 Ward has no right to hit Alec. Bella isn't his property. Ugh, I can read no more. No offense. |
ThunderSphinx chapter 9 . 5/12/2017 No way Bella would still love him after a hundred years without him. She only knew him for a few months before the Cullens left. And wouldn't the Bella/Alec pairing raise eyeballs in the normal world? Alec does have the body of a 12 year-old after all whilst Bella was 17. |
ThunderSphinx chapter 7 . 5/12/2017 Eddie is stuck in his 19th Century beliefs that women are the property of men. News flash, bub, Bella does *not* belong to you. |
ThunderSphinx chapter 6 . 5/12/2017 Jacob wouldn't have died. Shifters are immortal as long they keep shifting. And Bella was selfish to do that to her family. |
ThunderSphinx chapter 5 . 5/12/2017 Poor Charlie, Renee, and Jacob :( Ward I don't care about since he's the creep who left her. |
sacredorchids chapter 3 . 4/8/2017 How immature. More worried about Alice not doing what he says, like he controls her, than the fact that she just said she can't see Bella. |
GUEST chapter 27 . 2/11/2017 The story is good. But, you need a Beta. Don't they teach students anymore about the different ways to spell there (their - for plural possessive) or there - a location? Or don't the schools teach about To - as if giving something TO someone (TOO is a comparative or means ALSO). It makes a long story so much more difficult to read. If you haven't been taught that yet, I am sorry. However a Beta could help you. As I said, your story plot deserves it. If it didn't I wouldn't mention it. |
love edward percy edsme eragon chapter 24 . 1/8/2017 i love this story |
AasiyaDaya chapter 29 . 6/1/2016 OMFG! THIS STORY IS _SO_ GOOD |
AasiyaDaya chapter 27 . 6/1/2016 OMG, Rosalie is _such_ a brat! |