Aaawwwwwwwww

I really liked this story. It was action packed and edge of your seat good. Well done. But, please consider expanding it. Don't let this wonderful idea end there.

I really, really wished that you had written more. It just seems like there is more to the story. What was the fight about between Logan and Storm?

Anyway...great job. And happy writing!

Ok, some grammer errors, and a few confusing parts. Other than that... Gripping. I really enjoyed it. And not just because it's a Storm/ Logan fic. You have some serious potential here. Although, I'm wondering about the fight they had. Is there a prequel to this?

A great story. Very good.

I actually want to review this..but my heart is beating to hard for me to write properly, wow that was..wow..that was pretty near damn well perfect. loved it. Except for our Ororo dying (almost)

So I really freaked out for Ororo while reading this. And when she was declared dead... gah! Worthwhile read but jeez! Never put me through that stress again! lol

I enoyed the story. It was a good Rolo story and I love good Ororo stories and espically Rolo. You seem to have a good grasp of the characters. I hope you write more!

Squee'd! Aww, so cute! *huggles*

I really liked this story. I do recommend however, a beta because at times it was hard to understand what or where the plot was going (especially the phone conversation between Charles and Ororo). At times I felt anxious while reading it, especially when she was suffering a claustrophobia attack. I liked thhe rolo pairing as well, and how you got everyone's accent/personality down. Congrats :]

-kendra

this story was good- it had drmam and so many emotional moments- i am so glad that you wrote a rolo fic- i love stormy and logan-thanks please write more soon

Wow this held me onto the edge of my seat. Very well thought out. I loved the 'aw' moment at the end. tre bien.