Reviews for Dabbling in Drabbles of the FMA Variety
sincity27 chapter 31 . 3/5/2018
Cute chapter
sueb262 chapter 5 . 1/3/2018
Ohhh, this wrenches my heart for Al. :(
sueb262 chapter 4 . 1/3/2018
I really liked this glimpse into Ed before the tragedy. I don't think the series really gave us enough about their ordinary, daily inner lives prior to their being thrust into their fated roles. I loved the subtle sense of foreboding you managed in this one.

As for the second one, I don't think I remember that episode. Might have to go back and find it.
sueb262 chapter 3 . 1/3/2018
Liked this one very much! I'm curious what you meant by not having "written from this perspective before." If you feel like it, I'd love to hear what this experience was for you.
sueb262 chapter 2 . 1/3/2018
It's been a while since I've watched this series, so I couldn't guess who it was. :) Nevertheless, I found this an engaging drabble. I particularly liked the fifth sentence. It was adorable AND hilarious-a difficult combination to achieve! Good work!
animato22 chapter 26 . 2/13/2013
:D
amelialynn chapter 21 . 7/23/2010
YAY! Thanks so much. you did a really great job with it!
oakleaf chapter 19 . 5/25/2010
Awesome. They're really great stories and I hope there's more soon...

Anyway, thank you.
Sonar chapter 5 . 10/24/2009
Very good.
The Faerie of Darkness chapter 10 . 3/15/2009
This one is massively cool. Its all like, 'Ed died, but we fixed it. And by we, I mean Winry. Because she is a magic ninja. Which is why her and Ed are the compatability.' At least, that's what I got our of it.

- The Faerie of Darkness
Evil Little Dog chapter 10 . 3/14/2009
Oh, that last one...Pinako's medical journal. Like it a lot.
Evil Little Dog chapter 2 . 3/14/2009
#2 - Maes Hughes!
PrincessOfHeartsNYP chapter 10 . 3/14/2009
I liked the little Winry-Ed interaction there. I don't know if it was meant to be couple-ish, so I'm just going to claim it was an interaction for now ;D I liked the fact that even though most of the little eventful plot was surrounded around Edward and Winry, you put it in Pinako's perspective and let us see Winry's toughness from another view. Great job!_~
PrincessOfHeartsNYP chapter 9 . 2/4/2009
Ok, I got the whole plot itself it's just...The last two sentences threw me off, not in a bad way!...I think. I get what you're going by ]
The Faerie of Darkness chapter 9 . 2/4/2009
On a point that has little to nothing to do with your story, if my Civics teacher kill me on a boat in internation waters, she's breaking international law. I learned that today. Misinterpretation of questions reminded me. On to the story!

I like it. I like the fact that Ed is not paying attention to his sayings. Also, I think you made a small mistake in paragraph 5 and put a 's' on brother. Unless you were going anime-centric and including Envy. And the distractions of being useful... I need to write an essay for English...

~ The Faerie of Darkness
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