Reviews for Torture
angel of darkeness chapter 1 . 4/14
i would have loved for a a chap with Valerie's trial and her being to far gone and being emotionless the whole trial
LK chapter 1 . 3/28/2017
Surprisingly I've read worse and I'm thirteen... Thanks for the story and keep up the good work (-)
Firestone chapter 1 . 2/3/2017
That was a nice and sad story, way to keep Danny's characteristic similar. I loved it!
SleepingBeautyRocks chapter 1 . 2/18/2016
Do the trial of Val. She deserves it. She almost killed Danny Fenton all for her assumption that ghosts are evil when she DOESN'T know that for sure!
LuffyLover chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
Pretty well written :) I would, however, insert line breaks of some kind. The changes are too sudden, and it's difficult to keep track of where the scene is taking place.
TariqBates chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
Hi, my nam it Tariq Bates, I loved your torture story about Danny, please write a part 2. Please
tjw242 chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
You definitely did your research :P
Well done with this piece, the psychopath inside of me is pleased.
Oblitus Angeli chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
Is it wrong that I laughed while reading this? Oh and have you heard if Chinese water torture?
WitchOfCrimsonFire chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
Absolutly wonderful. If u ever feel up to it though, please add more chapters to this. I know its a one shot and everything but still it would be epic.
zoxy2 chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
you know some pretty good torture methods, now don't you, those could come in handy one day. (not meant in any creepy sort of way just stating a fact! :) )
Himinee chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Beautifully written and very descriptive. You're right, Vlad wouldn't do something like that, it make more sense that a crazy Val would.
DyingWarrior chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
you wrote this as if you have witnessed torture it was good i felt like i was there watching it as for my i have witnessed it dont ask me were but i have seen it before and you did good
vedisdragon chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
nice! and ive read tortured revenge-i wish it would fucking get finished soon! vlad torturing danny sounds like a great idea, but i like how you chose valerie instead. i hate that bittch. rather abrupt ending, but a great fanfic all the same.
Vanex chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Well, I suppose Valerie going insane was always possible, it's just one of those things people would never consider. Chilling story. Good job.
AJTREY chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
DANG DUDE THAT IS SO FREAKIN HARSH. I mean I can understand that but could you possibly have spared us a few of the more gruesome details. It is so freaking evil
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