haahahahahahaha! luv it! but my favorite is the kurama one, it was AMAZING! Please write more!

**snickers... then falls out of her chair laughing**

That was amusing. May all such MarySue Events be averted!

Hm, who could we do next... You ruled out the two characters (kick ass, I really must say that is how to discribe it), who is next.

Their name must have slipped-oh wait, Yusuke, right? Forgot him for a second there. Not to many MarySues for Kuwabara, are there?

P.S. My fav chapter was the Kurama chapter, it was too funny!

Oh my word. My mom came into my room wondering why I'm making so much noise only to find me rolling on the floor clutching my gut. I was practically turning purple from laughing so hard! That was while I was reading chapter 2. It would be totally awesome if you could update this story sometime soon! I love you and your scheming mind! LOVE THIS STORY!

*Cries and pisses self while laughing* Oh dear GOD! This story is a beautiful way to end the day! I love this parody! Especially cause they all don't end the same. Keep up the great work, and I kind of came in a little late for the actual fiction, but not quite when Mary Sues began to take over. I miss those days...

Kokuro

*sighs* If only it could be this simple to get rid of all the MarySues stories that the all the underage, squeeing fangirls just LOVE to write!

Like you, I've been noticing the extremeness of MarySues that's been littering this particular fandom. I especially love it when I select Kurama/Yusuke and I notice that, guess what? somehow a MarySue story just happens to make its way into the queue.

Anyway, I'm glad I'm not the only one.

It's getting harder and harder to find a good Kurama/Yusuke story, much less any nonMarySue story in this fandom.

Hn. I don't think I'll even bother asking from where you might have pulled that Mary Sue name. lol

At least, Hiei was smart to get some before taking off this time. So the humilation wasn't so vast. *grins*

Such is life. Loved this part: "“Fox, what is sex?” Hiei asks cutely. The writer squeals at how cute and innocent Hiei is. The smart! readers won’t bother to point out the number of years Hiei spent in Demon world, which is bound to be full of indulging demons.

Kurama pats Hiei on the head, again smiling that infuriatingly knowing smile of his. “You will find out soon, grasshopper.”

The grasshopper line killed me.

LOL I wasn't entirely sure what you were going to do with a second chapter to keep it interesting and fresh but I see you just delved a little deeper into the story scenario. (sounds like a bit of an oxymoron, doesn't it? Deeper story/MarySue)

Yes, I did forget who Kuronue was, but hell, I sure remember now. He was hot! Could definitely see Kurama dumping her for him. LOL

*another parody chapter saved*

You had me from the first line! LMAO I couldn't help but laugh at this. You handled the whole Mary Sue thing really well.

This would normally be the part where I start offer constructive criticism but it seems you've really minded your P's & Q's and dotted your i's. Good pacing, good structure... good point.

I think most people that get caught up in Mary Sue's are new writers and it really reflects thier personal wishes and insecurities with thier own appearance. Therefore, I try to guide them away from 'the light' gently.

The best part though, was were you un-beautified the Mary Sue. That was classic.

Ahahahaha! A lovely and damning tribute to an obnoxious group of Kurama stories, great job! Oh Mary Sues. I still can't believe that some people can seriously write that stuff and think its

appropriate to post...

I love this story lots! I laugh my butt off everytime I read it. That's totally how Yu Yu Hakusho fanfics are. Except the ending. Though I really hate the "raped/abused/tortured/molested/abandoned/etc in the past I don't trust anyone, but our love makes everything all better" stories. It seems a lot of characters have crappy lives.

O.O! I'm in love!

There are no words to describe how spectacular this fic is. The only one I can really think of is "epic". Other than that, nothing even comes close.

I laughed so hard in each chapter because SO many people make Mary Sues like this. It drives me insane, but you captured every one of their annoying qualities and made it hilarious. You deserve a freaking award for this, but my compliments are the best I can give you. I drop to my knees and bow to you. Thank you for writing what everyone was thinking.

These were my absolute favorite 3 lines:

"Hiei glances down at Little Hiei to find him at half mast, though the situation is totally inappropriate."

- Honest to God, I think I cried with laughter when I read this line. Something about it was just ... priceless.

"He tries to think of something macho and cool to say. Raising a dark eyebrow to look at her superiorly, he clearly intones:

“Hn.”

The girls’ face registers shock, because they are soulmates, and she can thus understand what he meant."

- This one cracked me up too. Your writing is brilliant.

And, of course: "He sets Little Hiei free, and the sex is amazing, even though they are still in the middle of the street, and Hiei supposedly doesn’t even know what sex is. All that is conveniently forgotten."

- Wow ... that is just ... wow. I love it. I love all of it. You are superior to me in every way. Congratulations.

By the way, I loved the other ones too, but I just took all the quotes from the Hiei chapter because it was the last one I read. Koenma dancing to the Pussycat Dolls rocked too.

Have I ever told just how much I love this Sattire?

Most likely not, otherwise I would have known about it!

I've read one, again, freaking ONE other parody like this and it did not kick as much freaking ass as this!

Keep it up, your a hit in my family! I read 'Unveiling the MarySues' to my mom, my bro and my step dad and two seconds in they were on the floor!

On another lesser note, I hope my OC isn't a Mary'...

“I am a yummyrific upperXYZ class demon. I refuse to work with these low-lifes,”

LOL!

I had something liek that in mind for chapter 2 in my story. This shit is awesome!