Oh my god they are so incompetent

LOL she flirted with and got mad at Barricade

This was an absolutely wonderful story. The last ten chapters had me so spellbound I was up until 3 A.M. to finish it. My impression was that it must have been a difficult write, so super kudos to you for doing it. I loved all the characters, and the plot was fabulous. I'm starting on the sequal immediately, because I haven't had enough yet. Thank you so much for writing this; it's a definite credit to both the fandom and fanfiction writing in general. Bravo!

-Oni

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Ari was flirting with Barricade, wasn't she?

Ahhh! Boombox? It's SOUNDWAVE! :) You know the way you portray Screamer doesn't sounds half as bad from the his malformed Doritos shape to his holoform? Although, which of his trine is Rad? Skywarp is coming into question but then again Stanton herself is pretty shady. hmmm...excellent story can't wait to read more!

I really enjoyed the story, and will be moving on to read the sequel... right after I do some homework. Which I've been putting off so I could read this. Urk.
The only thing I didn't really agree with was the wee little romance that popped up between Starscream and Alexis. A robot and a human, together? It's just too weird, and I've tended to avoid those kinds of fics thus far. Thankfully, it wasn't a big part of this story. I guess we'll see about the sequel...
Enough complaining. It really was a fantastic story, or I would've stopped reading when the romance appeared. Thanks for writing it, and also for writing a sequel. I would be mega-unhappy right now if this had been where it ended. ;)

I have to say. This was an amazing story to read. I love the way you set up the plot and placed the characters (and their relationships). It was a work of pure genius, thank you for writing it.

Actually I've found an ice cold Pepsi can help get rid of my migraines so you're not too far off the mark. It depends on the person :) Oh dear, she hit both Bee and Hide? Yikes!

This was an amazing story and while it has taken me several days to finish reading it, it was worth every minute. I loved the way you keep making new twists pop up when they are least expected and the way you tied it up in the end. I look forward to spending another week reading the sequel to this amazing fan-fiction.

Great story! I'll admit I was a little wary in the beginning with Starscream infiltrating the base like he did, but I'm glad I kept reading. I really like the way you made your characters believable in the TF universe and plot was very well thought out. :)

Can't wait to read the sequel!

oh, I laughed so hard...

"Ari kicked police car with number 643 that didn't exist..." She tried to flirt with Barricade! XD

Yeah, I can imagine him chasing them around town, because she kicked him... Poor Ari seems to have bad luck with guys :D

That was a totally crazy chapter with a great chase scene! :)

nice

A really great story here too! Loved every minute of it.

Air Force One has gotta be one of the greates Transformer fanfiction in history.