This is such a great story, is there more too come?

good chapter & more please

Haha! Pulling enemies out of the future... Sweets!

So, not super excited about Pangolin, but very happy about Stingerella.

I like that each new scene brings with it new developments. The only tiny thing I'd tell you to watch out for is reupdating us too often on certain elements.

I like what you're doing with SPD, having them discover their meant to be there but not knowing what they'll be going up against. Very cool.

Looking forward to seeing who this evil will be recruiting from the year 3007!

A long overdue review of Chapter 6...

It's nice to see all the Rangers coming together. Going from experience, I know it's not easy to juggle such a large cast, so I have to commend you on finding the little details about certain characters. RJ talking about his wolf spirit, Jason warning Dom about talking about the Tigerzord in front of Tommy, Xander recognizing Tanya and being such a ladies' man.

I'm looking forward to the story moving on to the next level. As cool as it is seeing you bringing everyone together, I'm ready for some twists and turns.

Cool trailer, by the way!

this is a great story i want to read more so keep it up

good chapter & more please

Cool, update soon!

Hey Grass King!

Ah, the arrival of the Jungle Fury Rangers. It's cool to see the roster of the story expand, though at the same time, some of those intros are getting long.

I liked the fact that Trini noticed RJ's tattoo and made the link to the Order of the Claw.

The pieces are slowly coming together and I'm liking. Very curious to see where it all goes from here. Interesting idea, using the Crown of the Gods in conjunction with the Zeo Crystal...

good chapter & more please

Cool chapter, but enough teasing with the power flux already! What is it?

The only criticism I'd have at this point is related with the intros. I know that they might be necessary for the characters who meet each other for the first time, but you might benefit from having them happen offscreen or just in a short narrative paragraph. Could you imagine the last team to arrive getting introduced to 80 characters? lol. Shortcuts, they're cool. )

Other than that, the Power Chamber! Awesome!

Wow, this is really good, you have explained everything really well, I have only seen MMPR-PRIS PRDT PRTF and a bit of PRMF, SPD and PRWF, I haven't seen them for a long time (besides DT) and I could still pick up most of the charters names, ranks and personalitys. There was a few tiny erors wiht spelling and grammar I picked up, but overall it was very good.

good chapter & more please

good chapter & more please

Alright, last chapter for tonight...

I really liked your revisiting of Forever Red, particularly the reason you gave for why Rocky wasn't part of the mission. Then, the reason Tommy passed on his Turbo powers. It might not be essential in the long run for the purposes of this particular story, but it was still a pretty nice scene.

Still very curious about that power flux...

Also, who's Tommy's girlfriend? Gah! The wait is driving me insane. And now you had to go and give Jase a mystery fiancée? D

Scenes that are short and to the point... Hmm. I ought to try that one out, sometime. D

So, been awhile since I reviewed Chapter 1. Onto Chapter 2. Tommy's dream was intense and interesting, and I'm wondering who this 'mystery' girlfriend is, since you purposefully seem to have omitted stating her name.

Taking Tommy as your POV character is a great idea because he's probably got the deepest connection to the Morphing Grid and the power, and having him be contacted right away by Jason works great for the same reason, considering Jason's implication with the team over the years (MMPR, Zeo, Wild Force).

I'm hoping this extends far beyond the teams already mentionned, but it's great to see the Dino Thunders and Ninja Storms again. It's also awesome to see your use of continuity, particularly with Anton Mercer's mention of messing with Tommy's dreams. And I really liked Kira's response to Tommy's request, that she doesn't want to let the other 4 Dino Rangers rush in alone.

Finally, intrigued about that power flux.

All in all, great chapter. Lot of content, yet very concise. It's got good momentum and great potential. Can't wait to read more. D