This is a great fic. It is intelligent and original and I hope that you continue it someday.

What a fantastic start... hopefully you'll pick it up again someday!

This is such a well written story. The imagery you use to separate the flashbacks from the present is so effective. The way the emotion of the moment seeps out of the page drags you into the atmosphere; I was tearing up at each character's 'remembering' because of the contrast between the grey reality and the fairytale-like memories.

The opening had me hooked. Your a really talented writer, don't stop,

Inkling x

Wow. Just wow. Thank you for writing such an intelligent and engaging piece of fanfiction.

Oh wow! Just started on this first chapter and already it's so good! It is well written, and somehow you managed to make it modern while still keeping the mythical magic feeling of the TV show. I can't wait to keep reading. :-)

Wow, this is good. I've been looking for a story like this for ages, and this is pretty much perfect.

Please continue, I'm loving this!

I like how you're gradually bringing in the characters by giving them their memory back. But I was wondering can Merlin can sense the ice lady that's waiting outside of his apartment as she believes or is his magic still a bit wonky? Also are we assuming they have memories of the original history (i.e. Mordred killing Arthur, Gwen running off with Lancelot) or is it only up to a certain point? Because if we're assuming original history, then I would think Merlin would have reacted differently to Gwen. But besides my few questions, good story and keep up the good work! _~!

I'm really glad you decided to carry on this story, it's so original, it's amazing, looking forward to reading more x

Wow, this seems really good. I was sure Win was gonna be Morgana though.. guess not...

Can't wait fir another add to maybe give us an insight into what Arthur and Morgana are going through.

Amy x

hmm what an interesting story! i'm loving it!It has a lot of potential. I can't wait for the next chapter XD

oh wow- great chapter! can't wait for the next update! aww, now i miss arthur!

Finally! I've been looking forward to the next chapter for ages! loved it, especially the fact that Win was Gwen, so she's not left on her own in the world without her best mate. Can't wait to see who they meet next, I'm betting Morgana ] as I think Arthur had a small part in the first chapter ] but then again, I could so be wrong ] please update soon! i cant wait to read more xx

Oh, good story! I eagerly await upcoming chapters. _

Omg, this /needs/ to be continued. As soon as is possible. I love the way you've set up the reincarnations, and i cant wait to see Merlin's reaction as he meets everyone and realises who they are. Please get the next chapter up soon as you can.

thanks

This is definitely very interesting. I would love to see where this is going. :D