Thanks for the story. Was enjoying reading especially appreciated a nice closure

This fic really impressed me. Your characters acted and behaved realistic. I liked your descriptions of the dying planet. I loved those few poetry lines you mixed in. All in all a very well written fic! Thank you!

This was beautiful.
Thank you for going through all the effort to finish this fanfiction.
Please keep writing.
-Bringer of the Morrow / Winged Serpent of Light

This was a marvelous read, thank you. I really enjoyed the way this tale departs from the norm with the nature and depth of content. The hazy subtleties left me both wanting and mystified (what was the real significance behind the trio of "gods"? Would the proud yautja race really cast Rune as a bad blood over something that, while significant and serious, did not seem gravely dire, especially considering the results of his interference? Etc.)
That aside, this was very interesting to read. The different perspectives provided insight that I would have never guessed at without. This feels like it would be a great prequel that would build up to an even better sequel that explores the dynamic between the two as they take on new challenges with all kinds of potential excitement between others and themselves lying in wait.

I was hooked from the beginning. Thanks for the entertainment. Any chance for a romantic sequel? Lol.

loved it. great story

I was too lazy to log in, but anyway.
My only word is; wow.
I will wonder through your next works of wonder and think they will hook me as much as this!

I normally dont review for already completed stories, even when I like the story... But I dont like this story... I love it. Your characters were amazing and I loved the way you described things. At first I was worried the ending would be sad, and I was pleasantly surprised to find that it wasn't (though it wasnt ideal, either). I really think you should make a sequel!

This was amazing. I loved it.

lovely lovely ending. although i would've like to read more about Cormag's thought at the end. :D

Loved it, plain and simple!

DIDN'T READ THIS UNTIL YEARS AFTER IT WAS WRITTEN BUT DAMN THIS IS GOOD. NO ..LET ME START AGAIN...THIS IS GREAT. FROM START TO FINISH EVERY WORD WAS WORTH THE READ AND KEPT ME GLUED UNTIL I WAS AT THE END.

WHY THERE ARE NO CURRENT WORKS LIKE THIS FROM YOU I DON'T UNDERSTAND, THIS STORY IS MORE THEN WORTHY THIS STORY SHOULD BE A MOVIE IF ONLY FOX DIDN'T OWN AVP, THEN MAYBE THOSE WRITERS WHO DO YAUTJA JUSTICE COULD ACTUALLY SEE A MOVIE THAT DOES THE SAME THING INSTEAD OF DUMBING THEM DOWN SO THAT THE GIANT ROACHES, OH EXCUSE ME XENOS, LOOK MORE INTELLIGENT THEN THE YAUTJA WHO ARE TURNED INTO BEINGS TOO DUMB TO KILL CREATURES THAT THEY'VE HUNTED AND KILLED FOR EONS, SINCE FOX LIKES GIANT ROACHES BETTER, FORGIVE ME, I RANT. I LOVE THIS PIECE PLEASE DO MORE.

very good story! I loved reading it. well done! I would love to read a sequel

This story enthralled me. I began reading it yesterday evening and have been reading through it as much as possible between life's interruptions.

It honestly is one of the better fics I have ever read for this or any other story-verse. The characters were well written, the story engaging, and the pace was perfect.

Thanks for the adventure with Rune and Siaran. It was worth every moment spent on it.

Yea GREAT story hope ypu have time to make another story just as good.