Would be nice if it was a Naruto x Hinata x Tsubaki.

Getting the feeling its strictly Naruto x Hinata which isnt bad but a bummer with all the Tsubaki setup.

DUDE! Upd8 this story! It's so damned promising, it hurts not to see this completed, you were not even into Soul Eater canon for cryin' out loud! If you have a legit reason for not completing it I can understand that, if not I'm urging you to continue this. Of course if ya are dead I can't really blame ya for not completing it, there is not really a good way to tell if you are or not. PM me if you are alive.

So to summarise; Upd8 the story/do something with it and if you are capable of writing/alive, send me a message. That is all. Zyte out.

Take me with youuuuuu!

you know when hinata laughed so hard when she broke naruto's nose. yeah, that happens to me when I find something extremely funny. you made me laugh as well. :)

Great story I like how it flows keep it up

...You ARE making them a couple, right? ...Right?

This is the best Hiashi I've EVER seen! A Spirit-like Hiashi! That is AWESOME!

Gaaahhhhh stupid hinata

Continue! Please! If you don't I WILL deam you Eviler that GARA! Please continue. I'm begging you!

Awesome as hell story

Pretty damn good so far, I hope to see more in the near future.

Just wanted to say that I'm loving how you show Hanabi as a real sister, there needs to be more stories like that. Haishi calling himself Papa is down right funny.

Just one thing, will you be including the consespt of madness/insanity and its effects on the soul? And if so will you be adding the Kishen?

Either way, keep it up!

Well, haven't seen this updated for a while. Had to go back and reread what happened to figure out what was going on, haha. The last chapter confused me a little cuz it was so short, but I figure you have something planned along those lines. Well, good job with the last 2 chapters, I look forward to reading the next.

Yeah, I have to agree that Spirit is a riot. I didn't expect that you had Hiashi with his personality in the last chapter but it's nice for a change as opposed to either acting like a stuck up noble that sticks to tradition or someone neutral that doesn't show a lot of emotion in public in other fics. And the bit with Hiashi and Hinabi was pure genius. Now all were missing is frequent uses of the Hinata Chop whenever Naruto (or Kiba and maybe Hiashi) does something stupid.

Are you realy making Saske into Kid.