Reviews for When You Touch Me
HoneyBear84 chapter 48 . 7/15
Love it and seriously hope you will start updating it again someday soon
PotterB chapter 49 . 6/5
I love this story and all your others. I hope you obtain peace in your life. We’ll be here whenever you return. Do it on your own terms, in your own time.
LaPirataAna chapter 49 . 4/1
I haven't been on fanfiction for quite a while, as I moved over to AO3 and stayed bc it was more organized/etc. But as I'm home right now, I've been reading a lot of fics and I decided to take a look at my favorites on . And this was one of the top of the list and I remember loving it so much. And I've just reread the entire thing and fell in love with your style and writing and the plot all over again. I see that you posted this notice in 2018, but I can honestly say I know how it is in regards to writing & not being able to update a story for a long while. So, no matter how long it takes for you to be ready to get back to this story, I will definitely keep my eyes open bc I absolutely adore this fic and how you've written Snarry's relationship, and I will always be eager for more. - Sending you lots of love, darling, and I hope everything is going well for you!
Silas Roman chapter 49 . 3/31
Please please finish this amazing story. I am anxiously waiting to know the ending. Your an amazing writer and this story has been a great comfort to me. Please finish soon.
baabisnape chapter 1 . 3/26
I speak of Brazil in quarantine! miss your snarrys stories. I feel like an orphan. :(
Camille785 chapter 48 . 3/3
I feel like this chapter could be the ending. Which direction could this story take? The end of the war? Pregnancy or adoption? I think that forcing yourself to continue wouldn't make the story as intetesting. The way it ends, it leaves us on suspense. Yes, it js a bit anticlimatic, but at the beginning, it was written that there should not necessarily an ending, or something similar. In the last chapter, Harry finally gets his kiss on the lips, which I was his goal for almost the entire story. The ending is sweet and fluffy. I loved the story!
Bisque-Ware chapter 49 . 9/17/2019
I'll be here to read it whenever you update, but if not, it's an acceptable ending as it is.
raniaighwair16 chapter 49 . 8/26/2019
I’d love to see snape finally trusting harry, maybe a chapter of where voldemort meets his end and at the end the curse on harry rises with its caster dead? Lol maybe the last words of the story is harry finally telling snape he loves him and snape showing his love in his own way? Idk i guess this is my imaginitive thinking talking?
selina18annamaria chapter 49 . 5/2/2019
I really look forward to any add ons of this story
Ronin101 chapter 49 . 5/1/2019
Sincere Congratulations on taking steps to make yourself a sweeter life - it’s so damn hard to do! I’m glad you to took the time; you’re worth the effort! I look forward to future updates 3
arya305 chapter 49 . 3/24/2019
Hello!
I love this story so much the wait for new chapters hardly registers with me. Every time I read it again, I find new thoughts that I hadn't had. Bottom line: this story is amazing. You are an amazing writer.
It does not matter that your writing style may have changed, or your thinking has changed since then. It only matters that YOU are writing this story. YOUR thoughts, whatever they might be, however they may have changed, are what I'd like to read.
You asked for our thoughts on how the story should proceed... I never had a definite plot in mind when I wondered about how this story would continue. Anyway, I always had a couple of questions about the story. Maybe they can help you awaken those brilliant dormant ideas in you for this story?
1) is the Sai fighting important to the plot? As in, is Harry going to use it against Voldemort?
2) The dream bridge that Harry and Severus have, is it two way? Can Severus use it to help with Harry's demons?
3) What is Voldemort doing during this story? Surely he is not content to just wait it out until Harry seeks him out?
4) God I wish Lucius Malfoy got his desserts for what he did to Severus. Like public humiliation... And castration? ;)
Regarding the ending of the story... please please make it a happy ending? Please please with a cherry on top? I've two reasons for trying to influence you so blatantly and shamelessly. The first is the first chapter of the story.. Harry is writing their Chronicles.. so I assume that the war is over and they are living in the HEA that we all dream of. So a happy ending is kinda predetermined by you... Don't you think? The second reason is that there's enough tragedies and bittersweet moments in real life, can't we just get that happy ending at least in a fictional world? Fanfiction is my way of disappearing... To be the spectator of something else that is wonderful and magical. Why can't we let at least our fictional friends have a happy ending rather than sadness that is all too familiar in our real life?
Wow, I wrote an extremely long note.. hope you're not annoyed.
Anyway, thanks for coming back. Hope you're doing well.
Love
arya305
LoonyLuiny chapter 49 . 3/10/2019
I am in the edge of my seat waiting to know what happens next. And I will tell you truly, whatever you write, however you write it, will be the way it should be.

Though a happy, or at least bittersweet/happy ending is most desired. With a few more rough times on the way.
Scifra chapter 49 . 3/6/2019
I only recently discovered this website, and I'm so glad to have found this story. Absolutely love how you have built up HP/SS characters and the alt world you've created. I do hope you keep writing this and finish it eventually. I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this for further updates.

Hope you are well, author, and keep up the amazing work!
Harriverse chapter 49 . 2/22/2019
As I just took the time to reread it, I have to tell you I suck at plots. Bravo on your insights, they sound like you fought hard for them.

Well, the boys have to keep moving on. You have given them a strong basis to build on. Harry's family is behind them, so that's good. It looks like they are approaching consummation as Harry woo's his husband.

They are vulnerable through the new potion as Snape will probably want to supervise it's use. Harry will eventually have to go out to engage the enemy. Are their werewolf babies or small children for Either of them to fall in love with?

It sounds like things have been quiet so far this school year. Would the apparition tests be a time to strike, or is that too done already?

See, I told you I can't come up with story ideas. You are already so much braver than I.

Keep it up.

Please?
NialeliKropf chapter 49 . 1/24/2019
Please continue writing this story I absolutely love it!
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