A truly intriguing beginning for a story, too bad it will never be updated, unless a miracle happens.

Zelas is so caring btw that she didn't care to preserve anybody else but Xellos, LOL.

Oh yeah! This story is great. Sorry i didnt review sooner. i've been a bit busy and forgot about the reminder email. Anyways, I remember why this story caught my attention in the first place. It just screams epic potential! I hope you update soon, my passion for this story was reignited.

Oh man, Levannar! You got me hooked... again! Ah, I couldn't help it, I had to read this chapter immediately! Oh wow, the story line so far is so intriguing and fresh! I haven't been this excited about a fan fic in awhile!

I'm glad to see that Lina and the crew finally met up with Xelloss. But what really got me was at the of the chapter!

"As the tiny quivers reached the farthest corner of the Astral Plane, deep in the darkness something stirred.

It was time to hunt again."

Those few lines sent shivers down my spine! Ooh, I can't wait to read the next chapter! Take your time, because this story is gold!

Juanita -

Hi! Very nice update! I enjoyed it like always. It was nice reading this chapter. I mean first I seriously needed a break from reality and your story reminded me why I loved Slayers in the first place.

I totally fell out of love with Slayers, I didn't like how Evolution ended... Huu, I need to get back to my own story. Thanks, you revitalized my love for the series!

Ooh, another chapter! Well when I free up some more time I'll get right on it!

Juanita:)

Not fair - a menacing foreboding at the end when the next chapter's going to be who-knows-how-long in coming! A nice job of making Xellos just a little OOC; you'd expect him to show a few cracks in that calm expression after what's happened.

Connects nicely with the prologue. A very well-done chapter: some clever dialogue and plot development.

Nice story youve written. The whole epic air around whats happening fits the series like a glove. Just dont forget to keep adding humour! Great work :)

Hi hi!

Gah, I’ve wanted to review this for some time! Stupid fan net and its technical glitches.

Anyway, reading this was like eating chocolate. I enjoyed it immensely! I especially liked the beginning, with Lina raiding the bandit camp, and how she nearly hit Zel, haha! I also like how you are portraying Luna. I definitely see her as having little to no patience with her sister. So great job as always!

Update when you can, okay? I’m practically jumping in my seat with anticipation for the next chapter, but no rush!

Innej:)

Once again another fine chapter. I noticed your writing has also improved! The story was already good but to see the writing improve throughout is facinating and will be kinda neat to see once its read over agian after its finished.

So the island draws closer...I cant wait!

Screw it, I don't care if I am the beta, I'm leaving a review.

This polished up well. I like the scene you've got in the morning when they're walking down to the harbor. It was a nice touch. And the cutting down of exposition right before that where they're hoping for the clouds to blow off because boredom can kill? Also nice.

I love that the harbor stinks. I can't say enough how much I love that you put that in here.

If I may make another suggestion, you might want to go through and rewrite/edit the previous three chapters, too. While this chapter has improved, the others are as they were and some polishing on them may (hopefully?) draw in more readers.

The plot thickens. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.

Neato story you have here! Don't worry about the spelling and stuff too much its not noticable. I look forward to another chapter!

Nice chapter! Looks like the group will have to get used to traveling all over again.

Great Story! I enjoyed it a lot!

I hope there will be some XL scenes soon!

Looks like a nice story. I admit I have no idea where this could end. There are so many cool posibilities!

This was a nice chapter. I really liked the way you handled Lina and the crew setting back into the routine of traveling again, lol! Already Lina was looking for bandits, haha! Can't wait for more Luna and Lina interactions!

Aw, don't worry about the grammar and spellings errors you might make! No ones perfect! Hell, English is my first language and I still struggle with grammar! Just correct em as ya see em! :) Besides, I have no trouble following your story!

Update when you can!

Innej:)