Sam finally got his wish: to kill Dean. The man has been trying since season one.

Enjoyed this from start to finish

Yay for 1st season fic.

You captured their dynamics very well, it was a pleasure to read.

Loved it!

Excellent story! Your characterization is wonderful, and it is what has drawn me to several of your stories. (This is the first one I've reviewed, though... .) Your bromance (not slash, thank you) and whump are both awesome. :) Great job.

Awesome fic, loved it. Great dose of hallucinating Sam and injured Dean with a fantastic dose of brotherly care and concern.

Oh, that was great for a quick fix of good case fic, and the combination of injured Dean and hallucinating Sam was awesome. I felt SOO terrible for Sam thinking he had killed Dean and then his childlike trust in his brother once he realized that he really was still alive.

Great story, I liked it !

Thank you :)

This is a great story! Your writing style is very smooth, grammar is good, and the lack of typos is wonderful.

However, I can't seem to get to chapter three of your story! I get an error when I try to go from chapter two to three. Any way that you can repost it? I'd love to read the end!

Okay, can I just say that, nine times out of ten, your fics leave me near tears? I have absolutely NO idea why - besides the fact that they're amazing, of course - seeing as I usually don't get teary eyes over stories. xD But really, you capture emotions beautifully, and the bond between Sam and Dean, even if it's set in S1. I really loved this!

Hehehehe That last part was really cute! :D Awesome brother stuff there.

Love, love, love this fic! Just amazing goodness all over the place! :D I was afraid Dean would get hit by one of those ricochets. Bummer! :( Made for an awfully good fic, tho. :D

Poor Sam. That creature really did a number on him. Cool that they can't swim. Sort of like the aliens from War of the Worlds being undone by the cold virus. :D

Really, really good stuff! :)

Great story! I like stories with some original monsters. My beloved TV Show (Supernatural!) is kind of... traditional. Ghosts and demons... and one Trickster! ;D So I really like stories with new challenges for boys!

And poor Sam... scared and hurt! And hurt and brave Dean - classical set! LOL I love it! :)

Bats,” Dean finished for him, then gave in to a full-body shiver. “Flying rats.”

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'Flying rats.' LOL...Bats are so cool...as was your story!

Most certainly should be an episode...played out in my mind as such!

Thanks for the fun time!

Karen

That was awesome.

Oh, I SO enjoyed that! What a great read! Thank you!