This is EPIC! plleeeaassseee update soon!

Wow, this is great, I love it! It has much detail and a very realisitic perspective of how Benjamin's life had been, and how Sweeney's life began. I hope this is a long sotry, I'm anxious for more!

Hm...I'm gonna be scrutiningly honest. You're probably one of the best writers on [[believe me, some people are just so obvious in their writing it sickens me]] and I will read some of your different stories if I ever find the time.

However, I'm not sure that I like this whole Sweeney Todd and Nellie have children. I mean, they both die, and I don't feel that Sweeney could ever have such a tenderness with children. Ever.

Still, like I said, lovely writing style. So vivid. Well done!