loved it! this is so good, sweet and romantic, but still in character, it almost made me cry, and that is saying something!

I really enjoyed the story. I thought is was interesting. I don't know how authentic it was, but I enjoyed the exchange between Ishikawa and Motoko. The ending was extra fluffly their admittance of love would have been so sweet. I see Batou as passionate person. I recall the time in Solid State Society at the end. He yanks the Major by her collar. He's indignant by her apparent callousness for Togusa's little girl. I just thought things would be a little more heated between them. Just my opinion though. Overall, a great story.

I'm not usually one for Ghost in the Shell fanfiction. I feel like a lot of them take the Major and make her too soft and sappy.

I really like what you've done here. It's good work, it makes me feel her frustration and the way she perceives her self-worth. Thank you very much for writing this, it really made my day.

(if you want to reply to this review, feel free to poke me on AIM. My screen-name is "pearlyunicorn1" )

Okay. That was amazingly emotional. I hope this isn't the end. Is this the end? Well, it is a fitting end. But that would mean there's nothing else for me to read.

But regardless, this was a very good piece. I liked the discovery of emotions and the last paragraph was wonderful.

Good job!

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YES LOVE YOUR STORY!PLEASE continue!

It's great! and very heart wrenching.

Please continue!