Amazing fanfiction! Hope you complete it someday .

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Jane and Alec are 12-13 years old.
They are not immortal children, but they cut really close.

London, 7-9 for the first and 13-15 for the other.

OMG. Love your writing style! Such a cute little thing isn't she!

its a great story and a sensible one to but i would really appreciate more carlisle and bella father daughter movements and please u[date the new chapters i and many others are desperately waiting

Hi. I know I'm kinda late on commenting, but I wanna know: How does this end?

I know it's been years but please please please continue!

I love this story! you did a great job

I love this! so good! 3

Wow, I just wanted to pop in here and explain how much this story meant to me. I’ve been a huge Twilight fan since I was 10 years old, and now I’m 22. I recently found out about fan fiction and this was my first story that I read. It took me 72 hours to read all of these chapters. Every night staying up until 6 am, one night until 8 am. Would wake up an hour or two later for work and then read all day at work as well. This was such an incredible story, I even told a friend it competes with the actual Twilight books. I can’t explain why this story was so amazing to me. But it made me feel so many emotions and put smiles on my face as I actually laughed out loud. I got sucked into this story line. The way you kept everyone IC but you put a new twist on them. My favorite was the pool scene with Edward and Bella, I re read it 8 times. Haha. I just wanted to say thank you for putting so much into this story. I’ll re read it over and over again. And even though it’s been 9 years. I hope you read this and know how incredible this story was and is. And I hope some day to see a sequel. Thank you for everything, I felt such an emotional connection to this story.

This was a really beautiful and captivating story. I would love to know how it ends! If you ever decide to pick the story back up again I would be ecstatic ️

oh there's a few places in the UK that I thought of that are wet and grey. Dartmoor in Devon, and lots of Wales. and Scotland. anywhere that's known to be especially green and lush. though saying that most people don't fi d Dartmoor green and lush. most people think its miserable. I think it's gorgeous.

please don't make this too dark I was enjoying it but I'm rather dreading what's going to follow. not sure I want to read it if it's too much. please don't overdo it. It's been a fantastic story so far.

i agree with Edward on spongebob