Boring

My problem with this series in general is the lack of care to Naruto’s death and memory. His enemies cared more than his team...

Made me cry here at the end. Beautifully done. ;)
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Read all of this in one go and the only thing I regret is not reading this sooner. Excellent story, with an awesome writer. Looking forward to seeing more of your stuff!

It was really fun to read. I especially liked how he thought something like “there is no way a missing-nin would become Kage” and becomes Otokage somewhere along the way. The last chapter where Naruto reveals to Tsunade (and Kakashi) that he is still alive is another highlight in your overall great story. Thank you for writing it.

This was really good. Tons of feelings, and emotional moments. I had a good laugh for a while there. And honestly, you wrote this so well, it feels it should have happened in canon. Not him leaving, but certainly realizing that the way people behaved with him was not acceptable.
Anyway, loved this story, thank you for sharing!

Not that I dislike this story or anything negative but the girl's name... Seriously?

As Hiraku learns every moment of the paperwork when the shadow clone pops, this really is just multitasking.

Now if he tried to make KYUUBI do it, well, he'd pretty much deserve the ass-smashing he'd surely receive. (That would of course be the only reason he hasn't tried.)

"I have accidentally added so many stories to my favorites lis lately it isn't funny"
Entiendo. A mi me parece triste cuando veo las últimas actualizaciones y no veo ningún fic que haya leído recientemente, solo algunos de los que ya han perdido interés

I was hoping tsunade wouldve been brought into the loop. Very sweet way to end the story too

You have no idea how much I love this story. I haven't really read something that had these kind of time skips and I am impressed how well done it was done. I think it would be so hard to write that way and you really did great. I love the personalities and humor... awesome awesome awesome.

Awesome series! I really enjoyed this - thank you for writing and sharing! :-)

I've enjoyed reading your work, it's short and sweet and doesn't spend thousands of words on irrelevancies. The plot isn't always the most logical, but the stories are fun anyway.

I wished that Hiraku either accepted the offer from konoha or taken the position that orochimaru held in the sound

Thanks for sharing !

***Pyrane***