| Reviews for Within The Darkness |
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   JustMePMM chapter 30 . 8/30/2018 Loved your story, great ending too, |
| JustMePMM chapter 15 . 8/27/2018 School, brave hope this ends well |
| Oneway2011 chapter 5 . 11/1/2016 I have an issue. There is no way Jake in human form could Hang on to a newborn against their will |
| sweetiegirl16 chapter 30 . 1/24/2016 loved it |
| csp4 chapter 25 . 3/19/2013 LOL LOL LOL OMG! This is right up there with 1918ward & the cell phone:::))) |
| csp4 chapter 24 . 3/19/2013 lol lol I guess if a soufflé can explode on Bella every time she goes emo, I'll let her live:) Edward & Bella getting caught by family & guests is hysterical::)) "So this is the environment you allow your children to live in Carlisle," Is Billy so stupid he doesn't realize these aren't actually children? Dork! lol |
| csp4 chapter 22 . 3/19/2013 "This is my fault," It only took Bella 2 chapters to start in! Kill her now! Kill her now! |
| csp4 chapter 20 . 3/19/2013 At this point I wouldn't mind seeing Edward, Bella, Carlisle & Jacob all dying because they all seem have gone insane & are pissing me off! Actually, Bella seems to be the only sane one in this chapter but I'm sure she'll go all emo 'its all my fault' in the future & I can't allow that to happen! Ok, I feel better now:) |
| csp4 chapter 3 . 3/18/2013 "Lying lifelessly on the ground was a lamb that must have gone astray" lol that was Edward's 1st meal too::)) "I'm a monster," I dry sobbed. "Look what I did Jacob!" Not sure what would make E & B monsters for eating lamb unless it was because they didn't pay the big bucks per pound charged in stores! Or maybe because lambs are so darn cute::)) |
| Steph A15 chapter 30 . 1/4/2013 This story was Amazing it was just perfect.I really enjoyed reading it and the views were so sweet they were just right.I loved your story. |
| Edward's spouse chapter 31 . 4/25/2012 excellent story. |
| TifAlyson33 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011 great story. nice plot |
| VampireandWerewolfLover22 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011 love it so far! i'll keep reading tomorrow. :) |
| MselleMiya chapter 30 . 4/30/2011 wow! so here i'm back, after a whole afternoon of reading this amazing story! i enjoyed every chapter and every line of this story almost as much as the secret compartment! but i've to say, it's a really good thing that I discovered this story just now and was able to read it at once, without having to wait for you to update because you ended your chapters with so many cliffhangers... so congratulation for this story too! I'm not quite sure what is my favorite moment because the entire story is so beautiful, but i really loved how Edward actually proposed to Bella! and the wedding looked also amazing! if only Alice could plan my wedding when i'll finally get the chance to met my own Edward... though i probably would never let her organized the bachelorette party... just like the secret compartment this story wasn't only touching, but it was also a lot of fun to read! i really enjoyed hearing everyone's thoughts thanks to Bella and Edward, especially at school... when Bella made Mike tell "his feelings" to the teacher and then when Tyler did it too... and the dinner scene when Jasper and Bella were both playing around with everyone feelings... it was definitely a lot of fun! now i'm just sad that this story is over! though i've to say, once again, i'm glad you don't own Twilight, cause if you did, then we would never have had the chance to read those great fictions you wrote! please, just never stop writing, i think that you're really talented! |
| Violet13Love chapter 2 . 1/4/2011 Love it! |
