| Reviews for Wonderland |
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roseandthorns19 chapter 3 . 2/2/2009 You can't just give interesting little flashes of all the wonderfullness that has yet to be posted, and not have a chapter accompany it! Regardless, I enjoyed these snippets, and please update soon! |
roseandthorns19 chapter 2 . 2/2/2009 Haha. Don't think I didn't notice the Twilight reference in there. (If the stabbing Renji with a pencil wasn't a Twilight reference, my mistake.) Anyway, I like your story. It is asmusing. Though, her story is extremely remeniscent of Sasuke's sob story, and recycling is not always a good thing, necessarily. Be careful to keep the story from being cliched. Other than that, I like your story! I'm also glad it will be OCxOC. This takes away from the Mary Sueness of Yuuki about signifigantly, which is good. Onward to the next chapter! |
Claamchowder chapter 3 . 12/24/2008 Gyah, thanks for having my three goofs! 8D You're such a pal, you pally-pal. XD And... YOU ARE GONNA GO DOWN IN THE TOURNAMENT! 8D BUT ONLY WHEN YOU FIGHT ME! DON'T LOSE TO ANYONE ELSE! |
Jennfire chapter 2 . 11/30/2008 love the twilight quote! everything is well written and i can't what for another update! |
indefinitelyhigh chapter 2 . 11/30/2008 Wow, this is awesome! Aw, I feel sorry for Hazumu! Wow, Renji seems hot, lol. Can't wait for next chapter! |
Claamchowder chapter 2 . 11/30/2008 8D Wonderful chapter! Very cute, very nice. I like it! XD Oh, OH! Since Kira isn't going to be in this fic -just remembered this-, can I maybe... submit a char? I mean, Daisuke has a brother... -mumble mumble- and that brother is on the original team -mumble mumble-... if you already have a character in mind, then that's fine! XD Reason why I'm asking now: just remembered what was mentioned in the last chapter. Anyways, I REALLY don't want the details of the UBER SHOPPING TRIP, LIKE OMG! -_- I prefer just going on with the story. ... XD |
x-ClinicallyInsane-x chapter 1 . 11/23/2008 I really love your style of writing and really like this story so far. I can't wait until you post more. |
Jennfire chapter 1 . 11/21/2008 feel special, i never reveiw! *laughs* not really, cause then i wouldn't be reveiwing now, would i? anyway, like it; enjoy it; am happy to see my favorite characters again! (i just devoured 'Wait, I died') can't wait for an update! (for this one, duh;) happy belated birthday! (technicaly, it's only your birthday anniversary, but yeah- who am i to judge?) *blinks* must never eat honey and chocochips when running off of no sleep... |
Claamchowder chapter 1 . 11/19/2008 This is great! I love it! XD Wait a second... DOES THAT MEAN THAT... ITAMI AND DAISUKE, TOO? -squeal- Anyways... I can't wait for you to update! |
Tentenperson-Temari cosplay chapter 1 . 11/19/2008 this is nice |
babyjugs chapter 1 . 11/19/2008 i'm confuzzed but it's cool... |