Reviews for Wonderland
roseandthorns19 chapter 3 . 2/2/2009
You can't just give interesting little flashes of all the wonderfullness that has yet to be posted, and not have a chapter accompany it! Regardless, I enjoyed these snippets, and please update soon!
roseandthorns19 chapter 2 . 2/2/2009
Haha. Don't think I didn't notice the Twilight reference in there. (If the stabbing Renji with a pencil wasn't a Twilight reference, my mistake.) Anyway, I like your story. It is asmusing. Though, her story is extremely remeniscent of Sasuke's sob story, and recycling is not always a good thing, necessarily. Be careful to keep the story from being cliched. Other than that, I like your story! I'm also glad it will be OCxOC. This takes away from the Mary Sueness of Yuuki about signifigantly, which is good. Onward to the next chapter!
Claamchowder chapter 3 . 12/24/2008
Gyah, thanks for having my three goofs! 8D You're such a pal, you pally-pal. XD

And... YOU ARE GONNA GO DOWN IN THE TOURNAMENT! 8D

BUT ONLY WHEN YOU FIGHT ME! DON'T LOSE TO ANYONE ELSE!
Jennfire chapter 2 . 11/30/2008
love the twilight quote! everything is well written and i can't what for another update!
indefinitelyhigh chapter 2 . 11/30/2008
Wow, this is awesome! Aw, I feel sorry for Hazumu! Wow, Renji seems hot, lol. Can't wait for next chapter!
Claamchowder chapter 2 . 11/30/2008
8D Wonderful chapter! Very cute, very nice. I like it! XD

Oh, OH! Since Kira isn't going to be in this fic -just remembered this-, can I maybe... submit a char? I mean, Daisuke has a brother... -mumble mumble- and that brother is on the original team -mumble mumble-... if you already have a character in mind, then that's fine! XD Reason why I'm asking now: just remembered what was mentioned in the last chapter.

Anyways, I REALLY don't want the details of the UBER SHOPPING TRIP, LIKE OMG! -_- I prefer just going on with the story.

...

XD
x-ClinicallyInsane-x chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
I really love your style of writing and really like this story so far. I can't wait until you post more.
Jennfire chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
feel special, i never reveiw! *laughs* not really, cause then i wouldn't be reveiwing now, would i?

anyway, like it; enjoy it; am happy to see my favorite characters again! (i just devoured 'Wait, I died')

can't wait for an update! (for this one, duh;)

happy belated birthday! (technicaly, it's only your birthday anniversary, but yeah- who am i to judge?)

*blinks* must never eat honey and chocochips when running off of no sleep...
Claamchowder chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
This is great! I love it! XD

Wait a second...

DOES THAT MEAN THAT... ITAMI AND DAISUKE, TOO? -squeal-

Anyways... I can't wait for you to update!
Tentenperson-Temari cosplay chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
this is nice
babyjugs chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
i'm confuzzed but it's cool...