lovelovelove this! First of all, I love the writing itself. I love that Vaan isn't very nervous, he's "broken-her-favorite-vase-nervous". I love how the writing, though third person, feel really personal, and the reader can feel Penelo's thoughts shift, feel her sympathy kick in. I love that Penelo is handled so well, as young girl still confused about herself and the future and about the people in her life. (I loved the detail where she thought she was in love with Vaan for two weeks)

Excellent story!

This si so beautiful! You don't often see much of how Penelo feels about Reks and I love how her thoughts change inbetween the main bulk of the text and the ending. The ending was perfect. Loved it!