Great story man, really made me wish that there were more stories of a civilian life for Tex and Church. Really made me cringe at the end. Really well done.

the one thing I saw was that there's no silent hill archives for halo ecept red vs blue

the perfect end to the not so perfect story. you under and over personalized some of the characters and you really under did church's death. other than that and the disapearance of the robot couple and doc it was pretty good

awesome, im about to read the second part now,

You know, I read this story for the first time nearly two years ago, and I have to tell you, its still the best Red Vs Blue story out there. It just fits in a way that makes it easy to understand, even if you've never seen the movies. All in all, I'll give this book a 4.9/5. Thanks for writing such a wonderful stoy for the RvB community.

LOL. that was a hilarious x-over take of rvb. sucks for church but at least alessa gets to have an actual life (unfortunately it's at a rehab for soldiers, though & she's stuck with a slut, a slacker, a nutcase sergeant, a know-it-all, a fruit, a sex-starved moron that disses her "father," & a brain-dead fool who seems to think the guy he team-killed is his best friend forever. at least there's tex.

DAMN ALOT OF RELIGION IN THIS STORY BUT NONE THE LESS AWESOME DUDE/CHICK YOUR AWESOME MAKE MORE STORIES..WAIT THEY ALREADY CAME OUT GUESS WHO'LL BE READING THOSE-ILLINOIS P.S THIS GUY

[DARTH VADER VOICE]NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-AGENT ILLINOIS P.S WHEN READING THE END LISTEN TO 3 DAYS GRACE NEVER TOO LATE ITS A GOOD SONG TO END OFF ON

GOD DAMN CLIFFHANGERS-ILLINOIS

THAT GIRL HAS [WHATS THE NAME OF THAT MENTAL SICKNESS THAT MAKES PEOPLE CLOSE TO ANOTHER VERY QUICK] CLOSE PERSONA LOVESS WELL IM PRETTY SURE THATS NOT IT BUT ITS VERY CLOSE NEXT THING YOU KNOW ALESSA IS GONNA BE CHURCH & TEX'S NON-BIOLOGICAL DAUGHTER-ILLINOIS

CHURCH IS RIGHT HE HAS HIS ALPHA SKILLS IN HIM AND HE DOESNT EVEN KNOW IT...CHURCH THANK THE DIRECTOR FOR GIVING YOU THE SKILLS WITHOUT THEM YOU BE UUUUM THAT FIRST MONSTERS DINNER-ILLINOIS P.S OUR LITTLE BAD AIM CHURCH IS FINALLY STARTING TO BE A BADASS WITH A KNIFE

YEAH CHICK/DUDE DO IT FOR YOURSELF MAKE GOOD FAN FICS IN THE FUTURE ILL BE ROOTIN FOR YOU-ILLINOIS P.S I THINK THAT CAME OUT WRONG

FUCK YEAH..CHURCH,BUG KILLER OF THE YEAR AND THE KILLER OF THE BIG SNAKE...ALSO SOOOOO BADASS FINALLY A FAN FIC THAT MAKES CHURCH A BADASS-ILLINOIS

I DONT KNOW ALOT OF SPANISH BUT IM PRETTY CERTAIN HE SAID [NOT IN EXACT TRANSLATION BUT CLOSE TO IT]I HATE YOU REDS-AGENT ILLINOIS

YOUR SUCH A FUCKTARD LOPEZ!-ILLINOIS