ahhh this is so sweet!

also dang man raven 35 isn't old because I'm 35 and I'm not old haha anyway.

your rita here is so awesome XD could i ask if you have did the next one yet?

I love your Rita, your Raven, and your sense of humor.

omg i love this fic it is one of my favorites and i just love ravita/ rita x raven
there is just something about them

Where is this sequel you speak of. ;A; !

And I thought your Rita was perfect- I think when she's confused with her feelings she has a tendency to get vicious. And with a situation like this- well...

This story is just beautiful. I keep coming back to read it. Thank you so much for sharing!

Beautiful story - the ending was wrapped up quite cleverly as well. Great job!

Wow, I have never reviewed this story ? I mean, it's the first RavenxRita I've ever read ! I already loved them together before, but it's like if after I read your story, my passion turned into a burning passion and I keep reading it at least once por three months. It had been a little hard to understand at first as I'm French, but I already felt how much it was a "strong story" (I don't know if I can say that but... I hope you understand.)

What can I say ? Well, good job ! You made me happy when I read this so... Hurray ? D

(I hope you will understand all what I'm saying and sorry for the mistakes in my sentences.)

... Apparently, I have never reviewed this... I feel horrible ToT

I've reread this particular story countless times now - even demanded that a friend of mine read it. The first time I read gloria, I believe it was sometime during November or December, 2009. I hadn't even finished the game yet - but I believe I was at Heracles at this point. I was... incredibly curious as to what kind of pairings people supported (besides Yustelle and Karol/Nan and Fluri [the last of which I don't really pay too much attention to but...]) and this was the very first Tales of Vesperia fanfiction I ever read.

The pairing was Raven x Rita and I kind of did a double take. I was like, wait, what? So I clicked on it, and I just... melted, for lack of better word. The two of them together had never even crossed my mind until then, and every little word and moment and all of it was perfect and made them work together -so well-.

You are the one who sparked my obsess- I mean, love, for this pairing.

(... on second thought, I think I left the Anon review. oh well. that was a crap review anyway.)

Have a happy new year, by the way! :D

LOVE, LOVE, LOVED THIS!

Utter amazingness, right here. Loved the use behind the 'my heat beats only for you' line from Twilight. That was just fantastic.

Just. Happy happy reader here, yes. :D

Are you still thinking about doing that sequel to this story? I'd love to read it... _-

Brilliant. Rita was spot on, and your handling of their issue was very well done, I should think。That bit at the end was funny and yet touching; I loved it.

And so the conflict has been presented with Rita and Raven: Age difference. As well as other things...

Great, awesome story. Writing flowed and I read every word. Thank you for writing this. C:

You wrote them pretty well! I loved "Messy, unpracticed, harsh, but it's there.." and the ending, how he evoke the words from the past and, of course, her reaction xD

Thanks for sharing it!

Wow.

Wow.

Wow.

Okay normally I don't support this pairing, but I'm inclined to read any story with Rita since she's awesome. But damn this is written really, really, really well. Impressive. I just picked up some tips with writing romance. XD

You...are...incredible.

This...is so beautiful. I've read your oneshot multiple times already and it still amazes me with each and every read through. There's just so much raw emotion and depth. I really hope you write some more featuring this pairing, but I'm very satisfied with this already! Thank you for writing it.