Sally was a pathetic character. She wants them to stop the ghost, but then why didn’t she offer details they wanted?

Dang it, I thought this story was complete when I started reading. Turns out it's not. Shoulda looked more carefully, I guess. For what it's worth, the two chapters that are here are really, really good. They kept me on the edge of my seat. Seriously, I couldn't read this fast enough, it was so good.

I hope that one day you'll be able to come back to it.

Ahhh! Why aren't you finished the story? Is really good... why?.

If you have gone so far you can finish the story, you already have done the hard part, you just have to finish it. Come on finish it, pleeeeease!

You took my gun!" Dean yelled. "You lied to me!"

"What?"

"I asked you if you took my gun, Sam, and you said you didn't," "What would you call that?"

"Get your things together and get in the car. You have five minutes."

OMG What is going on with Dean? he is scaring me...

ok.. I'll continue reading

This sounds really interesting. I'm super curious as to whats up with Dean. ]

No update since January? I'm deeply saddened by that. Here I was, enjoying this story to the nth degree, and no more chapters... *sigh*

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OH NO! Cliffhanger! You are evil! *sits and waits for next chapter* ;D

Oh, wow.

This story is very interesting, Dean's viciousness shocks me, it's great!

Poor Sam, good to know Bobby's on the scene.

I see that this hasn't been updated in a while, but I do hope you come back to it as it's very good!

good so far. Update? maybe? possibly?

thanks

VESPER

Great story! I can't wait to see where it goes! -

Thank you for the mail and yes, you are absolutely right...I really like this chappie...!

Poor Sam...Im glad that Bobby found him and I can only hope that Dean will be himself again soon!

Looking forward to the next chappie!

Hi, It's great to see you back. Firstly, before i comment on this chapter i would like to say that i am so pleased your little daughter is on the mend. It must have been a terrifying experience for you. There is nothing, i don't believe, that brings us so much worry as our children.

This chapter was terrifyingly brilliant. What on earth has happened to Dean, he really is scary as he vents his unwarranted anger at his brother. Lets just hope that Sammy is able to recover soon so that he and Bobby can find out what on earth, or otherwise, is going on and put it right, getting back the Dean Sammy, Bobby and all of us love.

Looking forward to the next chapter. x

This has stuck with me all day! Very intriguing, and I'm so glad you didn't stretch out Sam lying there all broken up or Bobby & Sam on the trail of wrong-Dean. I'm so looking forward to the rest!

I'm guessing it is no longer a question of if (something supernatural) but rather of what is going on with Dean. We stared here a split between the read Dean and the unknown thing that wants to kill Sam. I like that we are going to see some Bobby in this story. He is always a fun character to include.

I'm not sure if I'm interpreting that part just before the break with Dean reflecting on his behaviour towards Sam. It seems like Dean has figured it out but then Says Sam has to die. My current interpretation is that Dean figure out what was going on just in time to lose control to the supernatural thing and then stated Sam has to die.

wow! really good fic!

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