This fic! I am so in love with this fic! I can't believe the work that has been put into it. I read fanfics a lot and this is one of my most favourite ones.

An X-box ? The Marauders were all DEAD long before the first x-box came out.
The story takes place during the 70's and the marauders were all dead before the end of the 90's. The xbox came out in 2001. Please watch out for this kind of anachronism. It really took me out of the story.

My favorite . . . tail chasing . . . this is great!

oh . . . I'VE eaten dog food before . . . my grandmother's dog had died when I was 7 and i came over to her house to be her 'replacement' dog. His bowl was still out so i stuffed my face in it and ate some. My mom tells me i seemed to enjoy it.

Am i insane?
Do i want to be insane?

I loved everything about this, thank you for writing it!

Ahhh! This is really good so far! Awesome work, even years later.

So, I usually only comment on the last chapter of finished stories (so as to form a complete opinion), but I couldn't help myself. This chapter was stunning, as I'm sure you've already been told, but what impressed me most was the scene with Remus and James.
You see, although I usually avoid stories about the "incident with the Willow", I've read my fair share of them - and none have struck me as much as this chapter has. The thing is, in other works it's always been Remus who was angry and James who was the mediator, and understandably so. But here James' anger and Sirius' self-punishment were so captivating, so logical with the characters you've written, and Remus' words... God, they were so powerful, I sat in front of my computer absolutely mesmerised, reading them over and over... God.
What you had him say... "Don't you dare (...) be more angry than me." and then "But I forgave him." I can't, that was...
What I meant to say was, I loved this part, it was unbelievably well-written and I'm sincerely thankful that you wrote it. Someone had to say it.

Just reading through the list made me want to cry because each symptom makes me remember the different things, and you wrote this story so well it made me feel like I was part of those things. It also is a bit to relatable cause I do a lot of those things.

Ok so on the whole third person note my friend and I were in language arts and the teacher said none of you will be able to go this entire class without using pronouns so I came up with the genius idea of just speaking in third person and changing like hims/hers to the persons name and so me and my friend spent an entire hour in language arts not using pronouns just because out teacher said it was impossible.

I use omg a lot. Sometimes i use jk, but one of my friends has those initials and i just say it to annoy the hell out of her

HILARIOUS! I WAS LAUGHING UNCONTROLLABLY!

This is brilliant, honestly...GOD! if i start saying, i will cry-so i'll just AWESOME!

aw nice! good job.

*pats james on back* it's ok, I laugh for no reason sometimes too. xD

I just finished rereading this fanfiction after my first time finishing it a couple years back. I absolutely adore all the ridiculous puns, fantastically pulled off pranks, the hilarious interaction between the infamous marauders themselves, and all the other aspects of the marauders' years at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry which were stunningly spun into this tale. I recommend this fanfiction to all marauder-loving fans, those who love verbal battles full of wit(and in Remus's case, exasperation), and actions that will have you doubling up with laughter. I just know that it will be a favorite of its peers.