I call bullshit the UNSC would have more than seventeen colonies

Shame this was cancelled, it was getting really good. I'll check out your other version.

Fine. #pouts#

"... Or I'll detonate the mines currently attached to your hull."

Classic. Like it, seemed like a good fic. To bad it's dead...

I agree with exillion this story is much better than your new Cylon War one. Too bad you decided to stop this one.

I liked this fic better then the new one. The new one sucked

alright another bsg meets halo fic

I really like this!

It all seems believable to me; especially the way the UNSC is reacting to an "unknown fleet of ships" - believed to be an 'enemy' faction.

How else would they respond? Rock on over and chat over tea? :P

*can just imagine it*

I really look forward to reading more. :)

Halo BSG crossovers almost always revolve around the Chied being found by the Fleet after Halo 1 or 3 so this is a nice change of setting. The writing style is good and there's no spelling mistakes I can see. Very good story, please continue.

great story when is te4 next update?

okat the last line on the 3rd chapter was fcking amazing! i lol'd hard! haha amazing work there! Keep it up!

Adama got PWNED! I cant wait to see what happens next!

Great stuff, love to see how this goes.

Awesome story. I would love to see more of it in the near future. Keep up the good work.

As others have mentioned:

where "Where is Carmen Santiago?"

were "Where were you?"

we're "We are"

And:

you're "You are"

your "Is this your sandwich?"

Also, some of your dialogue seems clumsy... try reading it out loud to figure out where punctuation goes. Sometimes commas seem random. And you've missed question marks in some spots:

“Any response to our hails,” Admiral Adama asked.

should be:

“Any response to our hails?” Admiral Adama asked.

This might seem like nitpicking, but if you've got any accomplished readers, then every time something "weird" pops up they stop and correct it in their head... which you don't want if you want them immersed in your story.

very cool...I like it so far!