This was incredible! You did such a good job portraying these two and getting into the depths of their characters. It was a wonderful read.

I really like Nyssa...and the scene where she leaves the TARDISS is so sad cause everyone's trying to cry, but at the same time...

But there's also an underlying sadness in this story as well, because Nyssa left the company in 'Terminus'. I can really empathise with Tegan in that regard - it's easy to be angry at the Doctor, even the gentle Five, because he's still different from humans in regard to his longevity, his emotional scars, his experience, etc. The companionship between Tegan and Nyssa is portrayed so sweetly here - I'm glad Nyssa had been written into regulart status in 'Longopolis'. It was the best team in my opinion - that is, Five, Adric, Nyssa and Tegan were, but their adventures just didn't last long enough.

Like I said, lovely fic.

gODSPEED!

I despise annoying Tegan, but when paired with Nyssa she becomes more interesting. Nyssa, of course, is awesome both with others and on her own.

Excellent story. It brings out the depths of Tegan's personality and feelings, and almost succeeds at making Nyssa interesting.