Bella’s pathetic ness hurts to read. I’m cringing but still reading

Bangs head against the headache at Bella’s stupid actions. Anything but going back to him.

Powerful

Please come back to this and finish the story...

We want a a sequel ... pls pls

8 years has gone... pity it had a good plot but damn...

Me encanta el fic . espero lo continúes y termines y le den su meresido a victoria y espero lo haga alice jijiiii

I must be be a masochist bc I love how agnsty this got.

I'm praying that this doesn't end like "A Choice Between Three Good Times." This is hell of good.

This is the best story ever, and it's sad you left it on such a cliff hanger. Please update and finish it. Your a fabulous writer and have created an unfinished masterpiece.

if this story is abandoned, I'd like to adopt it please

Is this story abandoned? I hope not, would love to see the more if this cause I am really liking this story...

Any chance you'll come back to finish this? I just found it and it's really good. Good story, good plot line, I'm invested!

Well written, sad it was adandoned. A bit too many angsty chapters after Alice originally rejects Bella in c11; would have liked to have see Alice finally choose Bella

i realize the chances of this story being continued are basically none, but that said... thumbs up for "abandoning" it right at this moment. The effect is like Bella died right there, and since she died anything that happened after is just... something the dead don't know.