This was beautiful. I would love to read a sequel (maybe even a series of sequels) of what happened with this couple after Naraku made his 2 wishes.

I absolutely loved this story

omy. the ending was so evil :))) i was expecting a "happy ending" and thought i wont care but that ending wooohooo so bad :)))

Oh wow. I wasn't really expecting that ending, but I loved it. I would love to read more of this.

wow what a Story and what an end...interesting pairing

Loved this story!

Awesome story

That was AWSOME. Very Perfect NarakuXKagome.

This is sweet and sad at the same time. It was however truly a corruption that goes both ways

JESUS THIS WAS SUCH AN AMAZING STORY. I demand more! Please, make sequels! And a lemon, juicy and tart, oh please oh please! *bookmarked*

You know I'm his own way that really is the purest form of love Naraku could possiy have so I suppose it's not bittersweet but more like acidic sweet like a lemonade that you love but makes you feel like you got sucker punch and gives you stomach acid but, some part of its so enjoyable and refreshing that you just can't stop drinking it! However it was wonderful. I loved it very much. It was a true likeness of the characters

Wow...you know, I can actually see it happening exacty like this. Any chance of a sequel? Would love to see her reaction when she wakes up :)

I didn't expect that ending. It was so absolutely Naraku.

I loved it :)

Not quite the ending I expected but I love the story none the less... Once again you have temporarily sated my desire for a story.. . until I hunt down all your other stories.. BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
errr...darn, I still need to work on that evil laughter *it sounded like a cat coughing up a hairball*

O.O Wow.. That was sooo not the ending I expected... I like it! Good job!