Obviously, I'm working my way through you collection of stories... I loved this line:

"It can't be like when you were making naughty origami animals during craft hour that one time? Or doing that thing with the broken Slinky?" Just enough information to make us raise an eyebrow and grin. Loved it!

Love it. You really nail Murdock's particular brand of manic and Face's knack for simultaneously humoring him and being a bit weirded out.

You've got Murdock captured so well, this could have been a segment from one of the episodes! I love this story, and am glad to see that you posted it here as well as the ATSB2. Keep writing! I'm looking forward to reading more from you!

I do love your Murdock/Face snippets - absolutely love them. I love how you get inside Murdock's head in particular - there's very few writers I think that can do that convincely (imo anyways *sheepish* )

Freakizimi

Aw, I liked that one, was very like Murdock, one minute sad and then the next minute all happy again as if he'd forgog all about it :D