So wish there was another chapter of this!

So good

yeah, he's for sure going to push his luck. I live a great Malec focus and this is it.

Hot, hot, hot. I'm totally chearing for Alec!

Ooooh, me like!

Love this

I can't remember if I've ever reviewed this anywhere. But if not I deserve to be shot. I LOVE THIS! The humor and the internal voices going on are perfect for both of them. You did an excellent job at capturing them. The only thing I can honestly say is where's the sequel?

Lol! This was great and funny! I seriously hope you make a sequel. Thanks for this, Max/Alec ftw! ;D

Well evil stares from many and a sleeping baby on my lap I got sucked into another story even when I told myself I wouldn't and shouldn't, but I know I have a problem and will work on it first thing after I read every single story (and/or have to go back to work, which ever comes first). I enjoyed the story, even though I am more of a crazy in love before sex kind of person. But the split POV and the struggle was exciting. Thanks for a good story. Short and sweet is so nice sometimes. Now I need to go explain again to my husband that this isn't a porn site (again).

I love your originality! It was a long time since you updated or had a new story and Im craving it! Please, be so kind and write it!

That was just awesome! I'm absolutely sure that's the best one-shot fan fiction I have ever read

OMFG That was amazing! I swear Max having no heat during season 2 was weird and I wanted to know how she would react knowing that Alec was there...LOVE IT! D

Your first person writing seems great for it being your first. Nice work!

This is amazing! I love it!

hahahaha. awesome!

great work