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Mahrii chapter 4 . 12/19/2016 You have me hooked! xo |
DINDA CULLEN chapter 4 . 12/18/2016 MORE |
Debbie Hicks chapter 4 . 12/18/2016 5. ATTACKED/CHANGED/BITTEN/TRANSFORMED/GIFTED/KIDNAPPED/SUBJECTED/NOBLITY. bella's pov ANANILS mauled us with best friend with Va my sister then as squished Venom was into our frail dying hearts was glowing then KIDNAPPED TO iTALY WAS drained of blood but the venom suddenly was far too gone then suddenly BITTEN But with best friends end up sick no memories humanity were Royality From the three crowned then Humans killed were Vulcans far as all destroyed then as all of them was the lethal creature forever using my powers to lure them then lost the human memories and had thjm killed for my meals then worked with the Best Friends was hunting Vulcans the more killed the powrerful i became the seer had DDiscovered myself was completely drained ended up with memories with out blood with her with then found acuused of as all of deaths you there Felix End her with them with her sister then our united screams was BLAZED with them blazing from here With donated kids with her then suddenly BLEEDING More Alice she lost blood oh my god sher is dead Ruppped from here was RTaken then too late dead for good then brought in here with them but came too late Masters they are guilty of this crime of murder of the Vulcans is unable to attend school the venom was squished pushed far too later popped freely with her sister turned with best friends are no longer exist but found them gifted what blown apart bring them here that was it i resumed burning and screaming then poped with them blasting frely the afterside affect then poped from here then Vanishing then drained of blood then had a Cullern host reborn as Isabella Marie Cullen with the next Cullen siblings then blacked outside woke up alone with her with them popped Vanished in the lab no human life or memories stripped from me was as all of blood Alice! Then i was a newborn blasting with witnesses shatterd with us/them but cut from the hallow out bled out corpses then suddenly brought them here it's complete but they have too far way much many more venhom are into their organs are sterile good then blazing from here ripped from life to death full time unable to sleep or eat Alice she was assluated and beaten but scarred beyond repair i fear she is inferilite to have kids but is sterile we did ourt best Bella wake up i did suddenly Crimsm eyes took over had silvery moonlight skin so sparkling but i was not human look human was glowing then a more monstrous energy shooting u/them freely then sparlked full time then my throat was really sore then blacked out then suddenly vanished it as all of bodies then came too late Crashed then it came too late had a beating heart of my host still beating had a Roadkill scent retching alteed us ppaler but extremey very lightskinned with a greenish hue to their horror had Coyote pointed ear my eyebrows was slanted the hair was very long had curled bangs swirled i looked down wearing white wearing religious jewelry and crown-headdress swore vows and last oaths looked much older the hair parted in a religious hair fashion was darker was in fact a Sacred but religious woman with one twisted hand raised was in both forged hand jewelry was in fact a Vulcan priestess a woman of authority ranks titles and ceremonial and supreme power held offices and did secred rituals offered a lot of dead animals to Artemis and Hestia made me celibate who swore celibacy vows Sir! a Acolyte of Gol is a priestess bound to their order of women from Mount Seleya took final vows and oaths as a Maiden to serve in cloister life who is she T'Lar is my name i am Vulcan we need witnesses of our then blacked outside thgen poped but suddenly reported she is fae but her remains burnt but had stopped aging then murdered Marie wore white was a master we were spiritual women so the very all created a priesthood but myself was telepathic by touch was Syrannite followed Surak embraced Kolinahr was emotionless had logic so as all of them my dad who was dressed this robes are killing me ugh she is dressmaker t yikes a priestess she is spiritual but religious hoo boy you have freedom you could your planet ablities, |
cbmorefie chapter 3 . 10/1/2016 Great chapter, thanks! |
Debbie Hicks chapter 2 . 9/21/2016 3. the ATTACK/DEATH OF BEST FRIENDS/REBORN/CHANGED/HERSELF Then ALL OF ANIMALS mauled us bEST FRIENDS ripped apat in te shape of a group of BIG Fiercer grizziest bears wre torn but died in the process then as all of thevery far mazillions of human blood then Venom was fiery hot from here then suddenly stripped away the very as all mazillions of human memories and human lives we were brought in here then suddenly it was too late deceased with a bitten but drained host co uld not remember who I became Alice what is it it's her dead bitten into as all of places and with best friend one fatal bite jolt us awake the n screamed the Change then Volturi found us newly created departed then suddenly you broken as all of laws what law death Felix TORN With tem with Three with Allies with as all of the chosen with both with imprints with donated children EXECUTED But murdered fully time with him but blazing freely then popped then torn from us/them crashing freely bitten of Venom they heard it my galloping eartbeat began failing fastest but more stronger and suddenly it finally Deactivated went still fully ti,e deceased burst freely then poped from the earthly but mortal bodies severance of the soul ended up having a P,lanetary ablity then it ripped us from here you are punished for murdering the Vulcans are Guilty of this crime are deaed spirits good then they torn us/ with other into death then with them freed these ones are Guilty of the crime wait I hear a Newlife a changing heartbeat it's comimg then burst frely then taken away from here ten it came tpo late never made to my eighteenth birthday then blacked outside wit them crashing Alice who did to her with chosen best friend oh my god she's turned what we do hide her with the best friends then blazing us/them freed then we were Cullens Alie she was bitten but mauled then I screamed of the Venom with them merged with saliva then suddenly my skin color was very too far pale was paler the change was a successfully one Alice she has no seeds is fully sterile then blasting flatlined popped with them then had us/them severerance of the mind and soul forever then Vanished witth as all of the Chosen bodies were all of drained then suddenly reported Trouble in America a Newborn was turned illegally but had them desrtroyed these were as all of the each both is nno longer human is a Breed of fighter a Vampire slaying Sailor Guardian killed as all of Vulcans they tried to save their lives are completely deceased but departed from the living realm are unable to see tem fully time brother bring the very as all of chosen bodies to our masters that was it were with shifters with mated iimprints with child killed with allies murdered with as all of covens killed with the newborns then destroyed cremated them as all of them but she is gifted with a Mental shield unblocked her planetary powers is no longer alive with these accused then they were burnt as well but it really happened torn off the pieces then suddenly blazing then Alice was horrified what see sihtened my terrifying Red eyes my throat began itching me it was truest but full time they need what blood I need to hunt Felix murdered us and them I need to go now stop you broken as rule then blazing yorn fully time murdered with them ripped from life now death but freed from the bodies then suddenly exploding our katras fully time screaming then it came with each both taken away then it was too late became a Shadowhunter a inbetween person with them blasting forth then it was too late tree were all gone into the Palace Alice who did this the Volturi tey had her with best friends killed oh my god she is unable to be killed of both is a Hybrid then it came too late flatlined burst freely then lost the need to mate anymore but popped then it came too late from as all of animal blood ininto fifty states and my own as all was poisoned blasting but passed outside with a snap freed then it really happened lost eac both tree into their lab then it really happened my own eyes were Yellow magically shattering I was struggling to keep control Alice we have a Newborn not anymore my voice sounded really fiercer like chanting chimes and bells combined shattering both was nolonge human my skin sparkled in Kirai Sparkling Diamonds oh my god what is she Rose I am a species that with a born hose turned me Into a hybrid we need witnesses for her with them but in the dead of night popped freely of all of mazillions ancient aged oldest bodies suddenly my control was locked with Japer's suddenly advanced but popped freely brought in here reported these newst undead as all of them mazillions of them burst out as all of their carnivorous selves dispose of as all of tem but ithey did buried tem torn by melting as all of it then were all rebuilt placed them into here rotting fully time that was it our deaths murders and suddenly turned into dust were mazilions of kills rotting then it ame too late crossed over into more than all cramped then too late thrown drowned then I used my alien powers then hum this hant while younger I Know to be wry something scary I turn loose ghostling haunts BEETLEJUICE BEETLEJUICE BEETLEJUICE! IT'S SHOWTIME ISABELLA MARIE CULLEN! Miss me babes dyng for a burial he was here OH MY GOD! passed out fainted what is that smell oh my god a GHOST! That was it burst freely then it came too late became undead people by his magic forced us to hunt animals I was so thirsty with a thrust then all of animals deceased now young born differently then popped now in tune of hunger issues I had a gift from my mind it was mental shield Whoo wee what a hoedown of a feast that earned a smack from myself really far way too strongest ow Bells That's my husband look Rose I am immortal but Good god we hunted animals but blasted freely that was it no thank you I am Vegetarian she and I are controlled linked with tem in te dead of niht popped freely suddenly aged us to look eighteen years old or more that vanished then it came too late releaed a goddess self was Bellona was a goddeses of fire and energy so they then blacked outside poped freely then so they had god and goddeeses selves severely crunched ten lost the ablity to be killed or slain but became overextremely longest living people Bella you are so freaky with these lines yes I am acreature of the night I desire is blood Ugh not blood you have fangs YEOW! We are dead with a Soul like Angel he was a Vampire how we live like this adapt to this weather then tell the humans who really we are that's logical from Athena that news roared out ourselves stopped aging myself was active gone as all camping quests trained harder was stronger fastest from Hermes but war skills from Ares wrath from Hera and beauty from Venus and that we were a breed of people unable to be destroyed te bodies were bitten then more guards reported of our existence then ourselves look and felt human were a mix of both had extraterrestrial blood burned wild tey were furious onto us were much lethal slain Vampires were a breed of soldier if turned in the far ancient rockiest past were accused torn from here then too late freed then no longer there then it came more guards I heal alien but was a fast healer then I began to speak in Vulcan oh my god Bella it's animals here I GO I Let loose a Trilling Xena Warrior princess's wary signal jumped advanced but evolved my landing perfectly on my two left feet right on te ground with my leg bent used my powers to balnce better then I n time was poised and gracefully but more elegant as a Swan you did it what is on you a battle uniform oh my god Carlisles I adapt now now I have the planetary energy ten it really mess with us you'r sushi daimon oh man what this she's fit but toned uh oh I am Athletic now then noticed a cat oh you are Luna no time you are blissed but bound to Our rulers with you yikes what I am you are a true sailor scout Alice I am Super Sailor Betazed I am a alien then news of aliens on Earth roared then it really happened myself was much quickest then was no lner human but a Betazoid they were reading of a light yelled the words BETAZED CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! She is different with them a reincarnate of her past life has mental shield is Betazoid. |
cbmorefie chapter 2 . 9/21/2016 Thanks! |
harleymaria chapter 2 . 9/21/2016 Interesting story can't wait to see how It goes |
cbmorefie chapter 1 . 9/21/2016 Good start! |
Debbie Hicks chapter 22 . 7/23/2015 23. Bella's Shield myself used a Ward I Began to Chant in Tibetan from the deepest part of my own mind and spirit recalling a Character my own now Golden eyes glaring mess with me You'r Sushi In the name of the Silver Millennium Make them Golden eyed once more like Martians Without aging at all with my teammates Beyonds HENSHIN YO! myself was still Chanting I Felt a Radiance then I Screamed BETAZED CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! Then all of the Sudden in a flux of pure Energy Master she transformed into a Sailor Guardian I feel different here Goes nothing RISA CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! Jane She what Transformed it is a moon then herself stood in her battle uniform Here hair Brush please than this hairstyle the Jadzia Dax do hmm new look new style what this on me it is Called a Sailor Fuku boots and Gloves skirt and blood red earrings and my eyes they remain scarlet I am a Sailor Guardian Queen Serenity I am yours I am one of Neo-Queen Serenity's royal Sailor Guardians Sister I am doing my AU Sailor Moon Forum ritual hold your sunflower Here goes nothing he felt it a strange haunting breeze he Glowed in a radiant burst of light stood Alec what this Alec here is my Knight speech Ioitia Knight In the name of the Glorious Silver Millennium of the 30th century IOITA KNIGHT STREAKS FROM THE SKIES! He jumped in a gallant swinging Sorry I have to act like Tuxedo Mask He is a orphan yes You landed well meet the Knights I look strange but I am gallant now Jane what are you doing she is possessed I am the pretty Guardian of Battle and Strife in the name of Risa I right wrongs and Triumphs over evil Sailor RISA IS HERE! Oh no we are what from the Moon Kingdom so us from a long dead Civilzation: Lunarians then I was so fast but it happened with allies with the Both covens Burst with both with More Allies From the bodies with wives Freed with them but with Both but suddenly Vanishing but dropped them but it came too soon I conjured a spell to make them normal but they gained golden eyes but the damage done to them then the bodies Preserved but it ripped out the Young and Youth had dark force powers and had them transformed by Dark magic as Generals revived but Shattering both with the Italians fleeing to America To warn us and them but Each both Collided but Freed of the bide then all of them were more as all of them suddenly Shattering But both with others and with as all the Remains but it came too late they were as all of them more than thirteen or as all of them gone as all of them into a changed palace with them had our and their looks from the now as all of ova/sperm Exploding as a new species of Vampire with dark powers they were us/them wicked cruel scornful wrathful and with bitter hearts but they were breeders had turned us into Kindred means Wanderers in the Language of the bible we were forbidden but had hybrid kids followed in death but the new race was born that a healing and unity others were Intergalactic Lycans then a lot of shouting I Yelled KROYKAH! She spoke Vulcan my head hurt we have kids but they are breeders they are with mates had kids our newest race Dear you will learn both languages we can't die we must hold counsel then it was too late the bodies as all of them vanished from here to a palace. |
nicoleleecarter chapter 20 . 5/30/2014 please update soon |
absent minded20 chapter 2 . 5/30/2014 awesome! |
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 4 . 5/21/2013 Awesome. |
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 3 . 5/21/2013 Cool. |
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 2 . 5/21/2013 Very nice. |
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 1 . 5/21/2013 Awesome opening I love it. |