Reviews for To Tread Lightning
Aslania chapter 18 . 5/11/2018
Wow , very well brought up psychological aspects of the characters that turned the events, and honestly I prefer this version of avatar universe better! And I love how Azula is the one fulfilling the prophetic fate in the crossroads of destiny, because honestly she can do it a lot better than zuko - considering her political background and a lot more , It would be nice to remake the path of zuko from the avatar universe into Azula's as the bringer of balance together with Aang, just as they did in the comics, just an idea, if hopefully you will continue .

Thank you for this story! you have brought peace into my love of Azula's character, Great Story! thank you _
JimmyHall24 chapter 13 . 1/22/2018
Lion Turtle!
stephenjlesar chapter 1 . 12/4/2015
All Hail Firelord Azula!
holmesfreak1412 chapter 18 . 8/4/2015
I enjoyed this. How I love the what-if scenario where Azula still has a chance of redemption and not portrayed as a one dimensional villain. Which is to be expected because we have TyZula in the mix. Alone, that is reasin enough for me to adore this. Such a shame. Such a shame. Thank you for writing this.
dragonball256 chapter 18 . 1/15/2015
Excellent story so far. I'm sad it was never finished though. Was getting so awesome.
divatox chapter 18 . 6/22/2013
It's obvious that this fic is abandoned but I just need to say that it's great. I have loved how the narrative works.
Guest chapter 18 . 5/23/2013
amazing story. it's really a disappointed if you drop this story. please continue, n hopefully soon
zenler chapter 18 . 2/28/2013
Nice work ;D;D Thank you for the time to create this! ;D
Please come back chapter 18 . 1/14/2013
I know you've probably long forgotten about your Fanfics but it would be so great if you came back and updated. Your stories are amazing. I wish this was the story line to happened in the show instead of having to watch Azula have her emotional breakdown :(
guy chapter 18 . 12/2/2012
Just wishing for an update to this or any one of your other unfinished Avatar stories.
Kxali chapter 18 . 10/9/2012
You should really update this. It's so well written, I got so into it and I wanna finish it :(
Hana-chan chapter 18 . 9/30/2012
Please update soon :) I really enjoyed reading this story, and I love everything about it. I'm glad to see the changes going on with Azula, and I am curious to see what happens next. I hope you feel motivated to continue this story soon :)
xxpbtrk chapter 18 . 8/1/2012
Amazing story! You should continue!
MetellaStella chapter 17 . 5/24/2012
I'm seriously doubting Roku's negotiation skills by this point. You catch more flies with honey than with vinegar, O wise Avatar.

Come to think of it, Roku is a lot more like Azula at this point than she herself is. He shut down Sozin angrily at first, then later expected Sozin to straight *fear* him enough to refrain from his plans. Great social, political and persuasive, skills, there. -._-.
MetellaStella chapter 14 . 5/24/2012
"Her dedication to the young Avatar was unwavering. He admired her strength in the face of adversity—a defining characteristic of those from the Water Tribe."

Her dedication to community/people is a defining characteristic of the Water Tribe. The second is more Earth Kingdom sounding. Water Tribe are *adaptable,* more than they are plain strong.

Gotta say, the Ty Zula was cute at first, but Ty Lee is seeming more and more like a piece of drapery or a nice, comfy couch. She's not playing much of a role in anything, and the comforting scenes are getting a little repetitive. Even her brief visit with Zuko, which initially came through as a pivotal moment, seems to have faded a lot in importance.

All that said, this idea with Aang and spiritbending is very interesting. And I failed to mention before, that Li and Lo got a pretty epic line a couple of chapters ago. They really are good advisors.
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