A great story. Very good.

I agree with LucyCrewe11. This is a great little fic; very original - I don't think anything like it has been done before. Nice job. Just remember to delete the other fic!

Well that was cute. not a bad little fic. But have you READ the guildelines on this site? You can ONLY have one copy of any fic. This one and "Tea Party" are pretty much the same thing. I'd say get rid of one and you'll be doing pretty well on here.

Good story by the way.