You really are a talented and imaginative Writer. Keep it up and have fun with it.

Fabulous intensity.

Fabulous!

intriguing.

Can you please continue writing this story i know it was a long tme ago and that you stop writing it but please continue thanks and all my hugs for you.

Isabella B. Cullen Malfoy

I think I like this one more than Period.
You said you will finish your stories, but you haven't updated in more than four years.
Please finish them.

WHOAAAAA! Holy crap! I really don't like Edward/ Bella stories but this one was AMAZING! I know its been a few years now so you might not update, but I have to tell you, I really enjoyed this. You're writing is amazing, and I wish you the best of luck on your book! :)

Wow you had a lot of drama w/ your writing. Hope you're finished w/ your studies and doing well, and still writing. You have/had talent.

I really like your writing style.

ok. im a little confused. but anyway why aren't there any more chapters? this story is really good but it just leaves on a cliff hanger and that's not cool at all.

Ok the way this started off made me think edward was the reason for the bruises. but then getting to the end clarified it. Pretty good chapter.

Very dark. I love this. Unfortunately, I doubt you'll be updating. But here's hoping ...

What happens next?

I enjoyed this chapter to death. Edwar giggling at himself made me smile, and the several paragraphs where Bella wakens are great. I want you to update, now!

The repetitive use of 'but her groom was dress in black, she would never be the wedding cake bride' really made me love this chapter. The tranformation is intense. Loving this story.