It would be sorrowful to be a hand. Always grabbing things and what-not.

I really liked this story! Now, this is going to sound really lame, but I actually felt emotion while reading this. Other than the angst and tragedy genre, (which I avoid like the plague) you don't generally see that anywhere else, so a big congrats to you! You've done something not many authors can do for this submission.

Heh heh, what was Jaffar moaning about? Probably pain, but...

"Gobs of vulnerary"? Never heard that one before! I guess it fits though. Interesting application.

Use gobs of emotion and vulnerary to treat all wounds. Except hunger.

10/10 Woo hoo!

By far the best Jaffar x Nino fic on this site, loved it :)

What a sweet tale! I love these two, with their innocent romance, and I must say, you did well to capture their characters. :) I like the inner turmoil you portrayed for Jaffar - a conflicted heart, muddled even further by the pain of his wounds. Their embrace was a bit abrupt, but perhaps that is indeed the impetus for Jaffar sparing Nino's life later on. He does return the favor! Great story!

Beautiful. You have a way with word. I've always been a big fan of Nino and Jaffar. The story you told right now made me all bubbly and i love that feeling. Keep it up!

perfecto... I don't know what happened previously but perfect'o were do you plan to go after this?

very romantic though that's not my strong suit I prefer.

humor and villian's but one can't make a thriller story without a romantic goodish bad guy.

Great Fic...even for someone who really doesn't know much about Fire Emblem!