| Reviews for The Lost Souls |
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   CandyDee chapter 7 . 10/28/2018 pls update more! cant wait to read next chapter... |
| FabPezBerry78 chapter 2 . 3/19/2014 well well well :) |
| FabPezBerry78 chapter 1 . 3/19/2014 Awesome :) |
| cethmistmyk chapter 7 . 12/4/2012 I'm confused... Un-confuse me please? :-) But it's very interesting all the same!o |
| grammar police chapter 1 . 11/11/2012 beggining is not right, its beginning |
| God's Perfect Idiot chapter 7 . 5/26/2012 This story could've been pretty damn good, it's got potential but when you wright the part in kursive and use the word "you" instead of "I" it throws people off I couldn't read those parts because it confused me so much making me skip them and thus I lost great parts of the story. But it's your story and I wouldn't tell a cat how to lick it's fur, so just do this however you want it, but keep in mind that it is damn hard to read for some people |
| Blaise Knight chapter 7 . 2/8/2012 like the story... am just a little confused with some chapters... are they flash backs from her original self? |
| the-poetry-of-ink chapter 1 . 12/25/2011 This idea probably originated from Stephinie Meyer's newest book The Host, you should read it. |
| the-poetry-of-ink chapter 1 . 12/25/2011 This idea probably originated from Stephinie Meyer's newest book The Host, you should read it. |
| sayiloveyouwhenyournotlistenin chapter 7 . 12/25/2011 awesome! post more soon, :D |
| Snackers of Shore chapter 4 . 8/9/2011 Its a great plot bunny... But you started confusing me when you used "you" instead of "i" for refering to bella... Well too each their own writing styles... Hope to read more soon! |
| ShadowCub chapter 4 . 8/6/2011 I don't feel bad about her breaking them up as he is a user. |
| lynettecullen chapter 4 . 8/6/2011 I can't wait for Bella to start home wrecking. I'm going to enjoy the hell out of it. |
| LordXeenTheGreat chapter 3 . 8/6/2011 Great Chapter! |
| LordXeenTheGreat chapter 2 . 8/6/2011 Great Chapter! |
